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HAIKU 1
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HAIKU 1
SUMMER RAIN
DROPLETS GLISTEN
AIR SWEETENS
Written by
Spanker
Published
10th Dec 2014
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Re: HAIKU 1
Chiyo
(Miss Chi)
- Edited 12th Dec 2014 8:09pm
11th Dec 2014 8:18pm
I like the theme very much, as it recalls last summer's atmosphere. But wouldn't call it haiku since for me a real haiku shows the 5-7-5 pattern.
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re: Re: HAIKU 1
Spanker
19th Jan 2015 4:42pm
THX MISS C
SOMETIMES LESS
IS BETTER
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re: re: Re: HAIKU 1
Chiyo
(Miss Chi)
- Edited 20th Jan 2015 7:32am
20th Jan 2015 7:30am
:-). Free verse haiku are on the rise, I recently heard.
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