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Shhh
Hush now
Whispers my love
for you
Hush now
finger to mouth
Shhh
Touch
feel
accept me
around you.
Thoughts
mine
yours
ours
escaping
abandonment
soul
spirit
minds
running free.
Shhh
Hush now
Watch my slow rise
the power
Queen to king
before
slamming
hard
deep
downwards
forward
leaning
falling
hair
cascading
impassioned lips
meeting
saliva sweet
dripping
inviting the storm
flooding
I'm making
don't fight it
Hush no more.
Cast out the demon
accept me the lover
release yourself
into my care
I got you
I got you
Shhh
Published 10th Dec 2014
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10th Dec 2014 7:19am
Really good...I like how loaded each line is and only a single word to boot.
10th Dec 2014 7:22am
thank you crystal
sometimes its creative to use few words for the common good of the scribe
doesn't always work though xD
sometimes its creative to use few words for the common good of the scribe
doesn't always work though xD
10th Dec 2014 8:44am
Yeah, it’s not always easy to pull off the single word style but you pulled it off beautifully :-)
thank you EM
I kinda got stuck with that style on my last few scribes
well part singular wording
I like it :)
some work and some don't though
I confess too..
there are some of mine that on second glances
appear not to work
but
that's
the fun
of
writing
h
e
h
e
xD
I kinda got stuck with that style on my last few scribes
well part singular wording
I like it :)
some work and some don't though
I confess too..
there are some of mine that on second glances
appear not to work
but
that's
the fun
of
writing
h
e
h
e
xD
10th Dec 2014 10:17am
10th Dec 2014 10:22am
