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Heat
In the chill of the cold
During these long dark nights
You chase the frost away
With the heat you send through me
The temperature rises so quickly
Your presence causes my blood to boil
Sends tingles to unmentionable places
Awaiting your special attention
I'm totally pliable to your every desire
Tell me Sir
Open up and reveal to me your fantasies
I want you to always be a satisfied man
What is it you want most?
Tell me what I can do
To thrill you and send you over the edge
Unlike any woman ever has before
During these long dark nights
You chase the frost away
With the heat you send through me
The temperature rises so quickly
Your presence causes my blood to boil
Sends tingles to unmentionable places
Awaiting your special attention
I'm totally pliable to your every desire
Tell me Sir
Open up and reveal to me your fantasies
I want you to always be a satisfied man
What is it you want most?
Tell me what I can do
To thrill you and send you over the edge
Unlike any woman ever has before
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Re: Heat
9th Dec 2014 3:20pm
True pleasure comes from pleasing the one you love. Although receiving is just as much satisfying. Enjoyed Belle.
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re: Re: Heat
11th Dec 2014 8:28pm
My true nature is to b a giver
To make sure the man n my life wants for nothing n and out of the bedroom
Thanx for the read hun
To make sure the man n my life wants for nothing n and out of the bedroom
Thanx for the read hun
Re: Heat
9th Dec 2014 3:29pm
Your words, LSB, are enough to thaw the coldest of hearts. Beautiful piece indeed!
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9th Dec 2014 6:52pm
Over the edge reminds me of a movie
back in the day... It was about teen angst
Yea... Relative to the relieving of that kinda angst
I'd say over the edge is an amazing place to go! lol
back in the day... It was about teen angst
Yea... Relative to the relieving of that kinda angst
I'd say over the edge is an amazing place to go! lol
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Re: Heat
9th Dec 2014 11:47pm
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11th Dec 2014 8:40pm
Oh Hawk if he only knew
Just how sweet Southern honeysuckle truly is he would never want to leave
Just how sweet Southern honeysuckle truly is he would never want to leave
Re: Heat
10th Dec 2014 00:35am
this could be a request for a very dirty wish list, Belle. I wonder what you imagine would be on that list...
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11th Dec 2014 8:42pm
I don't want to have to guess gun
I want him to tell me exactly what he longs for
I want him to tell me exactly what he longs for
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Anonymous
12th Dec 2014 3:49am
Belle,
Usually puddles are one of the joys of spring, but yours in the midst of a winter thaw do lend so much more to the celebration of the season! Enjoyed :-)
tornado
Usually puddles are one of the joys of spring, but yours in the midst of a winter thaw do lend so much more to the celebration of the season! Enjoyed :-)
tornado
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