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Other World
Pulses... ...
shadows
formless energy,
it all comes in mad rushes.
Mesmerized you are pulled
from one place
to another
further and further
from your arms reach.
At first the senses are shocked.
Streaks of light rip your stomach
into a million points of sensation
your eyes twist in spectrums
your ears strain to dis-jointed harmony
your body moves to an in-tune out of time
living symphony,
and your mind goes with it.
shadows
formless energy,
it all comes in mad rushes.
Mesmerized you are pulled
from one place
to another
further and further
from your arms reach.
At first the senses are shocked.
Streaks of light rip your stomach
into a million points of sensation
your eyes twist in spectrums
your ears strain to dis-jointed harmony
your body moves to an in-tune out of time
living symphony,
and your mind goes with it.
Published 8th Dec 2014
| Edited 30th Dec 2014
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transcendental experiences in deep concentrative meditations..these pulses n shadows n those sensations remind me.juz me here. These verses,
"your body moves to an in-tune out of time
living symphony,
and the your mind goes with it"
Could conceive them well...n also this reminds me of a sorta 'transportation" experience in Hindu texts by sages called sithars, who could separate soul from one body to nest on another n they travel back. colloquially, its called"koodu vittu koodu paaithal" i.e., leaping from one nest to another..well, nothing religious intended, pure spiritual thing i was juz inspired to add here Matt. Tq fr this fine piece this morning n hope u donn mind me laying down too much here:)
"your body moves to an in-tune out of time
living symphony,
and the your mind goes with it"
Could conceive them well...n also this reminds me of a sorta 'transportation" experience in Hindu texts by sages called sithars, who could separate soul from one body to nest on another n they travel back. colloquially, its called"koodu vittu koodu paaithal" i.e., leaping from one nest to another..well, nothing religious intended, pure spiritual thing i was juz inspired to add here Matt. Tq fr this fine piece this morning n hope u donn mind me laying down too much here:)
9th Dec 2014 4:43am
