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Toy Angel
My life is chaotic
Separate from spaces
That I wish to fill
With all of my time
Within my sinful place
So as I stand here
Naked and ready to play
Will you stroke my fantasy
With your soft edges
Within the folds Of your embrace
Feel my bulging thoughts
Stretching your silken skin
Probing you Deeper and deeper
Bending your will
For my carnal grin
Kneel my sweet darling
Open your mouth and look at me
As my hands twist into golden locks
Aggressively showing you my hunger
Parting your soft lips so deep
Gag because you want to
Drool for my thirsty need
I melt within your eyes
As they are so pleased
At the pleasure that you are giving me
A steel hardened cock
Veins bulging
You drip in knowing
You make me so fucking hard
And throbbing
I lift you
From Your loving knees
To taste your cock hungry mouth
Before spinning you around
To take what I please
I need your tight ass
Need you to be naughty
Grab your cheeks and spread them
Gift me the treasure
Having my girl
The way
I need
To release demons
Into heaven
Of an angel
Who sacrifices
For me
Separate from spaces
That I wish to fill
With all of my time
Within my sinful place
So as I stand here
Naked and ready to play
Will you stroke my fantasy
With your soft edges
Within the folds Of your embrace
Feel my bulging thoughts
Stretching your silken skin
Probing you Deeper and deeper
Bending your will
For my carnal grin
Kneel my sweet darling
Open your mouth and look at me
As my hands twist into golden locks
Aggressively showing you my hunger
Parting your soft lips so deep
Gag because you want to
Drool for my thirsty need
I melt within your eyes
As they are so pleased
At the pleasure that you are giving me
A steel hardened cock
Veins bulging
You drip in knowing
You make me so fucking hard
And throbbing
I lift you
From Your loving knees
To taste your cock hungry mouth
Before spinning you around
To take what I please
I need your tight ass
Need you to be naughty
Grab your cheeks and spread them
Gift me the treasure
Having my girl
The way
I need
To release demons
Into heaven
Of an angel
Who sacrifices
For me
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Re: Toy Angel
Anonymous
1st Dec 2014 9:42am
Oh my! Wow..ok...sloping off to calm the fuck down now... Giggle
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1st Dec 2014 11:17pm
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1st Dec 2014 12:06pm
You're so bad, it's such a beautiful thing.
Sacrificial love is an amazing bond.
Hmm. That was a sizzling detailed write. Hot, is an understatement.
Sacrificial love is an amazing bond.
Hmm. That was a sizzling detailed write. Hot, is an understatement.
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1st Dec 2014 11:18pm
Re: Toy Angel
1st Dec 2014 6:24pm
whew! this sizzled all the way down the page..and the ending was Superb!!!
love this stanza:
"Feel my bulging thoughts
Stretching your silken skin
Probing you Deeper and deeper
Bending your will
For my carnal grin " wonderful imagery
and this part too:
"Gift me the treasure
Having my girl
The way
I need
To release demons
Into heaven " Simply Beautiful
love this stanza:
"Feel my bulging thoughts
Stretching your silken skin
Probing you Deeper and deeper
Bending your will
For my carnal grin " wonderful imagery
and this part too:
"Gift me the treasure
Having my girl
The way
I need
To release demons
Into heaven " Simply Beautiful
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re: Re: Toy Angel
1st Dec 2014 11:25pm
Poetic desire
Gracing my pages
Turning the temperature up
With her presence
Laced in my rage
Thank you
Gracing my pages
Turning the temperature up
With her presence
Laced in my rage
Thank you
Re: Toy Angel
1st Dec 2014 8:22pm
Soul this aroused all of my senses so gentle but hot and Dominating at the same time.. beautiful erotic with love Crim
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1st Dec 2014 11:29pm
Lovely Crim
Pleasure stirs when wet lips kiss raw spill that penetrates.
Thank you
Pleasure stirs when wet lips kiss raw spill that penetrates.
Thank you
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2nd Dec 2014 3:06am
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re: Re: Toy Angel
2nd Dec 2014 3:16am
Raising the dead
From dark dreams
Taste the shadows
That linger
For your lustful screams
From dark dreams
Taste the shadows
That linger
For your lustful screams
Anonymous
- Edited 25th Sep 2020 3:45am
15th Dec 2014 11:20pm
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Re: Toy Angel
2nd Dec 2014 11:56am
Given the subject within this very heated
n raw spill I must say the title was fucking brilliant bro!
n the rest was WHOA MOMMA hot!! lol
n raw spill I must say the title was fucking brilliant bro!
n the rest was WHOA MOMMA hot!! lol
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2nd Dec 2014 1:06pm
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8th Dec 2014 2:52am
Re: Toy Angel
Good GAWD! As!
I need to visit you more often! I love this it's a powerhouse beast!!!
Then again, all your art is right in the heart!!!!
Zazzles xo
ITRLIG
I need to visit you more often! I love this it's a powerhouse beast!!!
Then again, all your art is right in the heart!!!!
Zazzles xo
ITRLIG
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8th Dec 2014 3:03am
Zazzle, thank you for visiting and feeling the love beneath the rage of my need.
Re: Toy Angel
8th Dec 2014 2:56pm
Sexy dominate man! She brings you much pleasure in this hot, erotic scene! Molten to the imagination:P
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15th Dec 2014 11:30pm
To have you molten
Seams opening
Slip into dreams
Of my bindings
Thank you Blue Angel
Seams opening
Slip into dreams
Of my bindings
Thank you Blue Angel
Re: Toy Angel
9th Dec 2014 4:51am
Hmmmm...you could be my evil twin AwakenedSoul. Even your name speaks of my purpose. This was hot....take what you want so I can get what I need;) Loved it.
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re: Re: Toy Angel
16th Dec 2014 3:07am
Thank you Kandi, we all have a twin. Probably many. I am honored to be thought of as one in the land of Kandi. Thank you for your comment
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Anonymous
4th Jan 2015 3:13am
Mmmmmm AS......I lay upon your bed......waiting to be your sacrifice.......smokin hot write......whew!! Xo :)
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6th Jan 2015 1:40am
Linens saturated
With the sweetest nectar
Of an angel blooming
Within my den
Thank you hun
With the sweetest nectar
Of an angel blooming
Within my den
Thank you hun
Re. Toy Angel
Anonymous
29th Mar 2020 10:25pm
I can definitely feel the carnal desire and lust, it just makes you want to beg to be taken with the full force of this piece.
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31st Mar 2020 2:11am
Thank you for the read.
Your eyes tracing the edges of my pages deserve nothing less then what they beg for
Your eyes tracing the edges of my pages deserve nothing less then what they beg for