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Inn of the Drift
In a magnificent cloak of ether
of a centripetal magnetic force,
the tree swung the driftwood in dreams.
of a centripetal magnetic force,
the tree swung the driftwood in dreams.
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Re: Inn of the Drift
30th Nov 2014 11:31pm
for me this stirred images of schooners and war ships of yesteryear cutting through the sea fog and mist ... their power derived by forces of nature and men in concert ... Their hulls and mastheads carved from heated timber for molding ...
A few other thoughts creep in - but the forementioned is most dominant
A few other thoughts creep in - but the forementioned is most dominant
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30th Nov 2014 11:32pm
Re: Inn of the Drift
1st Dec 2014 6:49am
My mind fits this with maternal instincts and a deep belief that wood is still partly alive after separation from it's tree. As always love your wit dear.
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re: Re: Inn of the Drift
I love the bit about the trees. If you've not heard it yet, "The Voice of the Trees by Bartholomaus", its on YouTube. You can find more on how he did it elsewhere, but the music is hauntingly beautiful. Thank you so much for the comment. One of my favorite things in Life is the Trees.
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