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PUSHING SARAH
pretty little patience.
a matador I am.
In this filthy little basement
it matters only that I can.
SARAH...SARHA'S FALLING
SARAH'S FALLING.
CURLING...CURLING INTO
A BALL.
Finishing with her tears
I'm I proud or ashamed?
It's exactly what she wanted
blood,and sweat,let's go again.
SARAH...SARAH'S FALLING
SARAH's FALLING.
CURLING...CURLING INTO
A BALL.
she is fetal now
but far from innocent.
a matador I am.
In this filthy little basement
it matters only that I can.
SARAH...SARHA'S FALLING
SARAH'S FALLING.
CURLING...CURLING INTO
A BALL.
Finishing with her tears
I'm I proud or ashamed?
It's exactly what she wanted
blood,and sweat,let's go again.
SARAH...SARAH'S FALLING
SARAH's FALLING.
CURLING...CURLING INTO
A BALL.
she is fetal now
but far from innocent.
Published 30th Nov 2014
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Anonymous
30th Nov 2014 11:23am
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30th Nov 2014 5:54pm
Always confusion, pain, and sadness in the tragic, overpowering, forced loss of innocence....
The emotional intensity, inscribed within your lines,leaves your readers with insight, mo Chara.
The emotional intensity, inscribed within your lines,leaves your readers with insight, mo Chara.
30th Nov 2014 9:33pm
I dont know what to say about this one but its truly tagic sad and painful but a good read ...
Anonymous
2nd Dec 2014 8:41am
much energy in this poem,Jasper...
felt,last line said it all
felt,last line said it all
