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My Fall
Wallpaper of blood
Peeling with sympathy
Dements the pavement
Enflames it with mercy
Tell me child
Can it be?
What was once alive
Is empty?
Peeling with sympathy
Dements the pavement
Enflames it with mercy
Tell me child
Can it be?
What was once alive
Is empty?
Published 29th Nov 2014
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29th Nov 2014 2:52am
Not bad I can feel the pain within the lines and it was deep however I think it should've been a little more longer. Other than that this was a pretty good write
Anonymous
29th Nov 2014 4:21am
beautiful, write.. love this..
Dave
Dave
Anonymous
3rd Dec 2014 8:53pm
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