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Darrel Wallace jr-420 cubic inches equals how many feet?
you don't
want nothin to do with me darlin
been from the other side of the trax
shavin lox
with butter blades
since buildings been burnin
and it was cool to die for something good
dallas winston got my back
backstreet badasses been stealin cars
that you didn't know were awesome
till 20 yrs later
dog earing pages
insults the author
but reminds a brotha
you gave a shit
7 million strangers
petroleum jelly dougy fresh
dance
backsliding in bathroom mirrors
comb the moustache
broom the burns
burn the bad lil white stragglers
too eager too die
vaseline
follicles
with somethin to do
fashionable
besides bein the man in prison
where are the ice cream shops
drag strips that drop off a cliff
hatin police
that throw night sticks
in the day time
bustin the place up
for bringin a guy
in on a shake
sometimes a brotha will die
to test you
jus sittin in the passenger seat
isn't enough
want nothin to do with me darlin
been from the other side of the trax
shavin lox
with butter blades
since buildings been burnin
and it was cool to die for something good
dallas winston got my back
backstreet badasses been stealin cars
that you didn't know were awesome
till 20 yrs later
dog earing pages
insults the author
but reminds a brotha
you gave a shit
7 million strangers
petroleum jelly dougy fresh
dance
backsliding in bathroom mirrors
comb the moustache
broom the burns
burn the bad lil white stragglers
too eager too die
vaseline
follicles
with somethin to do
fashionable
besides bein the man in prison
where are the ice cream shops
drag strips that drop off a cliff
hatin police
that throw night sticks
in the day time
bustin the place up
for bringin a guy
in on a shake
sometimes a brotha will die
to test you
jus sittin in the passenger seat
isn't enough
Published 28th Nov 2014
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28th Nov 2014 9:01am
yyyyup. that was awesome to read aloud. favourite lines:
"petroleum jelly dougy fresh
dance
backsliding in bathroom mirrors"
overall, very cool take on the cool back then when hair and cars were the shizz. dying a bad boy was worth it to some of them just to prove their ego was big enough to take it. noice. [:
"petroleum jelly dougy fresh
dance
backsliding in bathroom mirrors"
overall, very cool take on the cool back then when hair and cars were the shizz. dying a bad boy was worth it to some of them just to prove their ego was big enough to take it. noice. [:
28th Nov 2014 3:59pm
All that... aint gonna stress much to say on this
Got a g lean throughout, strong . Truly
Got a g lean throughout, strong . Truly
28th Nov 2014 7:36pm
28th Nov 2014 11:05pm
I picture you shaving your locks with Swiss army knives...
And driving a solid gold oldie, cause the passenger's seat want enough.
Much praise,
Madison
And driving a solid gold oldie, cause the passenger's seat want enough.
Much praise,
Madison
28th Nov 2014 11:55pm
29th Nov 2014 6:14pm
Shitcats, I totally never realized dougy fresh was out at least underground around the same time Outsiders was relevant.
Your spit makes such shit relevant again though. That's where the resonance of working class hero comes from. Well, that and shit like
sometimes a brotha will die
just to test you
jus sitting in the passenger seat
isn't enough
Ride or die
Word life, I wonder how many heads were popped playing Russian Roulette as an initiation... How many heads were popped on the first pull?
Your spit makes such shit relevant again though. That's where the resonance of working class hero comes from. Well, that and shit like
sometimes a brotha will die
just to test you
jus sitting in the passenger seat
isn't enough
Ride or die
Word life, I wonder how many heads were popped playing Russian Roulette as an initiation... How many heads were popped on the first pull?
29th Nov 2014 8:09pm
Absolutely new in reading your style, John. though i know your words hit more n fierce.. (and, am smiling on the comment on my page, tq). Curious to get to know more of ur world created..n that wud start with this listing:)
wud reserve comments on this piece till then.
wud reserve comments on this piece till then.
5th Dec 2014 7:31am
Back agn as said John, now with the backgrounds of dallas winston, darrel wallace n watnots of the world out der.the cool rough back felt in your lines, short n loaded. Death is one thing taken crisp n hot like a war front soldier. Only the scenario varies.. to the looking eyes. Not to such ones dying I hope.deadly ego takes them all, easy n quite quick. Tq fr this read:)
