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Offering
I offer this flower to you
only you my luver
your kisses are the key
to open these petals wide
Then kisses it shall be
soft and tender, shallow
now deeper, probing, learning
sensing your velvet desire
Let your lips invade
my every secret crevice
sensually seducing
every thought in mind
How could one resist
an offer so inviting
a flower, petals, secrets
you know I'll take my time
You apply the method to unlock
silky, moist petals seeping nectar
your tracing tongue and gliding lips
are the key, watch as I supine
(Thank you Vegas for corrupting with me)
only you my luver
your kisses are the key
to open these petals wide
Then kisses it shall be
soft and tender, shallow
now deeper, probing, learning
sensing your velvet desire
Let your lips invade
my every secret crevice
sensually seducing
every thought in mind
How could one resist
an offer so inviting
a flower, petals, secrets
you know I'll take my time
You apply the method to unlock
silky, moist petals seeping nectar
your tracing tongue and gliding lips
are the key, watch as I supine
(Thank you Vegas for corrupting with me)
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Re: Offering
28th Nov 2014 5:13am
This really is amazing, flower. I take it this is a duet (with Vegas?) and it couldn't be more seductive. The call-and-response format is very effective. "Watch as I supine"? How could anyone resist?
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1st Dec 2014 5:03pm
Thank you Crow.....yes this a corrupted piece with Vegas.....LOL!! We are happy you like this.....supine has severel meanings......any would work here.....look it up then reread.....appreciate you much..xo :)
Re: Offering
28th Nov 2014 8:48am
very nicely done flower you are so good with words got everything this poem really good
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1st Dec 2014 5:09pm
Glen......we thank you for taking time to comment......hope all is well with you..xo :)
Re: Offering
28th Nov 2014 2:18pm
Smooth as silk flow with sensual lingo
I'm assuming you did this as two voices
but it felt of one mind :)
I'm assuming you did this as two voices
but it felt of one mind :)
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re: Re: Offering
1st Dec 2014 5:10pm
Hey Poet......we thank you for such acompliment......appreciate you always....xo :)
Re: Offering
28th Nov 2014 7:14pm
A flower in Vegas, what a tempting thought as the poem spins the tail. The picture is perfect. Awesome write Flower, spectacular job corrupting Vegas
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1st Dec 2014 5:11pm
Hey AS......always good to see your smile grace my page.....we thank you for your spectacular response.....xo :)
Re: Offering
28th Nov 2014 9:19pm
to open theeeeeeeese petalssssss wide
this says it all a
and vegas has sliced mine
this says it all a
and vegas has sliced mine
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1st Dec 2014 5:13pm
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3rd Dec 2014 6:12pm
u speak on behalf of he he will spank u and say don't ever again read me why do u want to lose a mindless friend
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4th Dec 2014 5:27pm
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5th Dec 2014 6:13pm
u have composed this with vegas
and he has sliced me blocked ie
that's all lady
so tc be friendly with him
and he has sliced me blocked ie
that's all lady
so tc be friendly with him
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re: Re: Offering
1st Dec 2014 5:14pm
Hash...LOL!!! you've made me laugh.....we thank you for spreading your thoughts.....xo :)
Re: Offering
28th Nov 2014 11:23pm
ES, it is always a pleasure to be your corruptor. ^..^
You create art from my willful depravity. :)
This work being an excellent example.
Thank you! xo
You create art from my willful depravity. :)
This work being an excellent example.
Thank you! xo
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re: Re: Offering
1st Dec 2014 5:18pm
Sweet EV......thank you!! You've awaken my imagination once more......honored to corrupt with you anytime.....bring it....LOL!! Xo :)
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29th Nov 2014 3:53pm
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1st Dec 2014 5:19pm
Sweet Crim.....always appreciate your smile upon my page......we thank you greatly....xo :)
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30th Nov 2014 2:38am
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1st Dec 2014 5:21pm
Sexy Lena.......you make me sound
so......um.....naughty......thank you...LOL!!! We appreciate your words much...xo :)
so......um.....naughty......thank you...LOL!!! We appreciate your words much...xo :)
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2nd Dec 2014 4:30am
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4th Dec 2014 5:36pm
Sweet X......we thank you so very much for your wedding needful comment.....thank you..xo :)
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re: Re: Offering
22nd Jan 2015 2:10am
Sweet S....we thank you for spending the night with us....LOL!!....your company is always welcome......xo :)