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Cold Cigs (another of my earlier poems)
I can’t think straight,
I know this.
Style is day and night and
Cigs just taste better in the cold.
I like to let the burn set in.
When I feel the sting,
I want more and all at once please.
Everything is jaded so I stay faded.
Devious fantasies drive my mind.
I’m doomed and demented at times,
Newly found, most of the time,
And out of control, all the time.
See what you wanna’ see,
This is only the beginning.
I know this.
Style is day and night and
Cigs just taste better in the cold.
I like to let the burn set in.
When I feel the sting,
I want more and all at once please.
Everything is jaded so I stay faded.
Devious fantasies drive my mind.
I’m doomed and demented at times,
Newly found, most of the time,
And out of control, all the time.
See what you wanna’ see,
This is only the beginning.
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Re: Cold Cigs (another of my earlier poems)
26th Nov 2014 1:22pm
i've missed your poems AH...thank you for uploading this one...have sat here and read it out loud quite a few times to get the feel of it....tis very good....i like it....
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re: Re: Cold Cigs (another of my earlier poems)
26th Nov 2014 1:35pm
I miss your comments!
I know its pretty vague but I miss the way I used to just have fun putting words together like this,
kind of like ignoring the idea of making sense and just letting whatever I had to say go lol
I feel like now things are more controlled and structured.
I miss just not giving a fuck lol
I know its pretty vague but I miss the way I used to just have fun putting words together like this,
kind of like ignoring the idea of making sense and just letting whatever I had to say go lol
I feel like now things are more controlled and structured.
I miss just not giving a fuck lol
re: re: Re: Cold Cigs (another of my earlier poems)
please AH...don't let go of this part of you...i first read the poem 'in my head' and there was a 'bit of it not making sense' but when i read it out aloud...omg...the beauty shone through...which is why i kept reading it out aloud...am glad i don't have neighbours nearby...lol...
structure and control is good but sometimes you just have to let the words flow the way they want to.... :)
structure and control is good but sometimes you just have to let the words flow the way they want to.... :)
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Re: Cold Cigs (another of my earlier poems)
26th Nov 2014 3:46pm
AH love this...i totally get ur thought on the cig too
Especially the burn of a methol when its freezin out
Especially the burn of a methol when its freezin out
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re: Re: Cold Cigs (another of my earlier poems)
26th Nov 2014 4:01pm
Thanks for checking it out!
I'm glad you enjoyed and got it..
Happy to have you read!
I'm glad you enjoyed and got it..
Happy to have you read!
Re: Cold Cigs (another of my earlier poems)
27th Nov 2014 4:12am
Style is day and night and
Cigs just taste better in the cold.
I like to let the burn set in.
These words. Words like these continue to make you great.
Cigs just taste better in the cold.
I like to let the burn set in.
These words. Words like these continue to make you great.
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re: Re: Cold Cigs (another of my earlier poems)
9th Jan 2015 7:48pm
Re: Cold Cigs (another of my earlier poems)
27th Nov 2014 11:10am
"Devious fantasies drive my mind.I’m doomed and demented at times...And out of control, all the time."
Let it burn. :)
Let it burn. :)
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re: Re: Cold Cigs (another of my earlier poems)
9th Jan 2015 7:48pm
Re: Cold Cigs (another of my earlier poems)
2nd Dec 2014 3:35am
If this is only the beginning, then I cannot wait to see whats next! :)
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re: Re: Cold Cigs (another of my earlier poems)
9th Jan 2015 7:49pm
Re: Cold Cigs (another of my earlier poems)
9th Jan 2015 7:39pm
re: Re: Cold Cigs (another of my earlier poems)
9th Jan 2015 7:49pm
Re: Cold Cigs (another of my earlier poems)
Anonymous
9th Jan 2015 8:16pm
Bloody brilliant! A spliff in the cold for me though. Devious fantasies drive my mind...glad it's not just me who has this predicament lol :)
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re: Re: Cold Cigs (another of my earlier poems)
9th Jan 2015 8:24pm
Thank you! and cig or spliff, either will do lol
and your definitely not alone!
Thanks for the read! Your awesome!
and your definitely not alone!
Thanks for the read! Your awesome!
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Re: Re. Cold Cigs (another of my earlier poems)
14th Sep 2021 10:39pm
That's back in 2014. This an old profile. I'm usually on Rainy_day13
But thank you regardless. These old poems of my are actually pretty cool so while you're here you can always read a few more it's cool reading somebody's work from them when they were 20 years old I'm had a new profile since like23
But thank you regardless. These old poems of my are actually pretty cool so while you're here you can always read a few more it's cool reading somebody's work from them when they were 20 years old I'm had a new profile since like23
Re. Cold Cigs (another of my earlier poems)
Re: Re. Cold Cigs (another of my earlier poems)
14th Sep 2021 10:45pm
I know my ruck history. I think it was a mix of Cobain, Layne Staley,kid Cudi and the Weeknd when I was ,20 lol