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Deep Down
We both feel it
Down to our bones
It has caught hold of us
Why try and resist?
The power of our passion
Controls our thoughts
In constant need of release
Pleasure, only together can be reached
Come to me lover
Let's share an interlude today
I'm aching for you
My loins are on fire
Only you can exstingish it
You know me inside and out
I'm waiting patiently
For our next stolen moment
Down to our bones
It has caught hold of us
Why try and resist?
The power of our passion
Controls our thoughts
In constant need of release
Pleasure, only together can be reached
Come to me lover
Let's share an interlude today
I'm aching for you
My loins are on fire
Only you can exstingish it
You know me inside and out
I'm waiting patiently
For our next stolen moment
Published 24th Nov 2014
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24th Nov 2014 5:13pm
I don't believe I've ever read a more compelling look at desire. Time slows down for that stolen moment, and that's when the passion really kicks in. Beautiful, Belle, as always.
25th Nov 2014 5:52pm
Crow darlin so very true
Or if ur with the right person every moment is as exciting as a stolen one with somebody else
Or if ur with the right person every moment is as exciting as a stolen one with somebody else
24th Nov 2014 6:07pm
25th Nov 2014 5:53pm
24th Nov 2014 11:33pm
Very hot stuff here once more, Belle! I like it very much, it is a true and accurate musing on the fiery power of pure passionate desire. You're very skilled with this sort of writing, you know! :D
25th Nov 2014 6:00pm
Ty so much Jessica
I just let flow whats n my lil head at that moment darlin
Always the real me n my words
Im grateful that others enjoy it
I just let flow whats n my lil head at that moment darlin
Always the real me n my words
Im grateful that others enjoy it
25th Nov 2014 6:07am
25th Nov 2014 6:01pm
25th Nov 2014 8:03am
clandestine interludes are so exciting, Belle. burning my hands in your flames...
25th Nov 2014 6:03pm
Oh definitely sir
A passion only shared by two
Their secret n theirs only
A passion only shared by two
Their secret n theirs only
26th Nov 2014 1:47pm
This makes me think about the infatuation stage of a relationship, where both people like each other but nether is fully giving into it. Which is also the best part in my opinion. Oh and love the stolen moment line. Every moment with a possible new lover is a stolen one, love how you put that!
26th Nov 2014 4:54pm
U hit the nail on the head darlin
Its about the excitement we find n a new relationshi
The heat n temptation of a new love
Its about the excitement we find n a new relationshi
The heat n temptation of a new love
