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Blank Abyss
Piece by piece I let the fire build
And it's over the course of ten thousand years
That I regret the life for which I have lived
With copious amounts of forbidden tears
Blank. My minds an empty abyss
Hell will welcome me with an abrupt force
Time passes and passes and I seem to miss
Who or what I'm still fighting for
Is it worth it?
I don't know anymore
I don't care anymore
I don't wanna fight anymore
I hate it here
God if you're listening
Grant my most desired wish
....please
Take me the fuck away from here
And it's over the course of ten thousand years
That I regret the life for which I have lived
With copious amounts of forbidden tears
Blank. My minds an empty abyss
Hell will welcome me with an abrupt force
Time passes and passes and I seem to miss
Who or what I'm still fighting for
Is it worth it?
I don't know anymore
I don't care anymore
I don't wanna fight anymore
I hate it here
God if you're listening
Grant my most desired wish
....please
Take me the fuck away from here
Published 24th Nov 2014
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4th Dec 2014 8:56pm
"I seem to miss who
or what I'm fighting for
Is it worth it? I don't know anymore.
I don't care anymore.
I don't want to fight anymore.
I hate it here.
God, if you're listening,
Grant my most desired wish,..
Please take me the fuck away from here"
Your feelings flow well. It's well-said.
You sound like "a damsel in distress."
And THAT is just the person
a knight in shining armor
is looking for.
You're the kind of woman
That makes a man wish he were
"a knight in shining armor,"
For real, for real, for REAL.
Check out my piece, "Owner of My Heart."
or what I'm fighting for
Is it worth it? I don't know anymore.
I don't care anymore.
I don't want to fight anymore.
I hate it here.
God, if you're listening,
Grant my most desired wish,..
Please take me the fuck away from here"
Your feelings flow well. It's well-said.
You sound like "a damsel in distress."
And THAT is just the person
a knight in shining armor
is looking for.
You're the kind of woman
That makes a man wish he were
"a knight in shining armor,"
For real, for real, for REAL.
Check out my piece, "Owner of My Heart."
