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Chill Words

Your many chill words
freeze love in an icy heart:
winter will be cold.

Written by SweetOblivion

Published 22nd Nov 2014

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Re: Chill Words

22nd Nov 2014 2:48pm

You nailed it! Writing a 5 7 5 syllables with a constant theme is challenging. Great job!

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Re. Chill Words

2nd Jan 2018 1:37am

Thank you so much for your encouragement

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