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She Waits
She waits patiently
for him to kiss her gently
and fill her entirely
with his entire
width and length
until she's dripping
all over him
and gasping for air
as he feels her soft
but gentle swell grace him
violently whilst the scent
of their love drifts
aromatically in the air.
Evidence of where they'd been
all over one another.
for him to kiss her gently
and fill her entirely
with his entire
width and length
until she's dripping
all over him
and gasping for air
as he feels her soft
but gentle swell grace him
violently whilst the scent
of their love drifts
aromatically in the air.
Evidence of where they'd been
all over one another.
Published 19th Nov 2014
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19th Nov 2014 10:33am
Oh this is excellent, erotic prose. Thank you for sharing your talent. Great image selection to accompany your poem also.
19th Nov 2014 4:26pm
19th Nov 2014 10:35pm
I like the overall flow, but entirely and entire in two lines so close together is distracting, as is the choice or aromatically, though the latter is a much lesser sin.
20th Nov 2014 8:22am
