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break/me
My love be sweet
Do not stray
from this feeling
Be gentle when you break me
It's not my first time
Sacrifice your illusions
to rescue my heart
Aggravating the intentions
we have
bottled-up inside
For your will
Dances
through my imagination
Pravoking adrenaline
to serge with conviction
Desolving my resolve
to withstand your charm
Oh,
My love be sweet
do not stray
from this feeling
Be gentle when you break me
It's not my first time...
Do not stray
from this feeling
Be gentle when you break me
It's not my first time
Sacrifice your illusions
to rescue my heart
Aggravating the intentions
we have
bottled-up inside
For your will
Dances
through my imagination
Pravoking adrenaline
to serge with conviction
Desolving my resolve
to withstand your charm
Oh,
My love be sweet
do not stray
from this feeling
Be gentle when you break me
It's not my first time...
Published 17th Nov 2014
| Edited 7th Oct 2015
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17th Nov 2014 5:42am
In the second to last line, I'm not sure if you want it to be "you" or "thou", but either way it's a misspelling. Otherwise, I think this is really quite good. I don't really like the idea of telling someone else for certain what to do with their own mind musings, but, in reality, this is, I think, a rather good poem.
17th Nov 2014 7:34am
