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Macumba Women
Drums beating in the depths of the jungle
A summoning to the darkness
A beckoning to the fire
Women, bodies shining with oil
Leap the flames
Zombies, popped-eyed with rapture
Erections ripping through their rags
The women sense my presence
The ebony priestess flings her finger in my direction
Orders her acolytes to bring me forth
Knock me to my knees
She undulates in front of me
Forcing my face into the volcano between her thighs.
A summoning to the darkness
A beckoning to the fire
Women, bodies shining with oil
Leap the flames
Zombies, popped-eyed with rapture
Erections ripping through their rags
The women sense my presence
The ebony priestess flings her finger in my direction
Orders her acolytes to bring me forth
Knock me to my knees
She undulates in front of me
Forcing my face into the volcano between her thighs.
Published 15th Nov 2014
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15th Nov 2014 5:36pm
Oh my Crow quite the hot write hun
It might b 30 degrees outside but its 100 in here lol
It might b 30 degrees outside but its 100 in here lol
15th Nov 2014 6:09pm
Glad to supply some steam, Belle. I imagine you've got plenty of your own. That 30 degrees does sound kind of nippy though...
There's much to be said for musical women that like to play with ears. :) very creative write.
16th Nov 2014 4:03pm
16th Nov 2014 4:22am
that's high adventure. spying on their secret ceremony, & now you pay your penance...
16th Nov 2014 4:04pm
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18th Nov 2014 6:54am
i like this crowfly...very much... and its not at all long....
could picture it quite clearly.... :)
could picture it quite clearly.... :)
18th Nov 2014 7:27pm
Thanks, kateA. My poems tend to be a little on the short side. I like to get as quickly to the point as possible. Maybe I could stand to use a little more local color.
19th Nov 2014 2:48am
Oooooo Crow.....what a sexy write this is.....your paint a sexy visual that's for sure.....enjoyed....ALOT!!! Xo :)
19th Nov 2014 11:52am
