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Life and Love
Life wrinkles your skin
Love scarres your heart
Love glues lovers together
Life splits them apart
Life and love
Like leaves on a branch
Like stalactites in a cave
Like snow and avalanche
Love and life
Like hearts shivering at nights
Like blankets worn thin
Like dying
On a perfect day in spring.
Love scarres your heart
Love glues lovers together
Life splits them apart
Life and love
Like leaves on a branch
Like stalactites in a cave
Like snow and avalanche
Love and life
Like hearts shivering at nights
Like blankets worn thin
Like dying
On a perfect day in spring.
Published 14th Nov 2014
| Edited 15th Nov 2014
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14th Nov 2014 11:09pm
15th Nov 2014 3:26pm
Thank you, dear Speak, for your lovely words and for liking the poem! Glad about that!
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15th Nov 2014 00:05am
nice reflections in this, Chi. they are both ponderous & unpredictable...
15th Nov 2014 3:33pm
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15th Nov 2014 3:50pm
Well, yes, especially in this case :-)... Thanks a lot, whale! Always appreciate your kind words.
15th Nov 2014 4:40am
15th Nov 2014 3:52pm
15th Nov 2014 5:10am
Outstanding poem, wonderful message!
You surprised me again my dear with a fairly long one! lol
You surprised me again my dear with a fairly long one! lol
15th Nov 2014 3:54pm
Hahaha! Well, let my thoughts flow and - here you are! Glad you found so nice words for my "fairly long" one, my dear friend :-).
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15th Nov 2014 2:24pm
You overwhelm me with the images your words stir in my memory. And your ability to do so in only three verses.
15th Nov 2014 3:58pm
Glad to have reached you with my poem although for me three verses are kind of an epic poem :-). Thank you so much for your kind words!
15th Nov 2014 5:01pm
Love and life
like stamps on an envelope -
sent with unknown destination...
Well done, Miss Chi! :-)
like stamps on an envelope -
sent with unknown destination...
Well done, Miss Chi! :-)
15th Nov 2014 5:21pm
We should have made it a collaborative poem :-). Life and love are wonderful topics and your suggestion is a real enrichment :-). Thanks sodium589 :-)
Anonymous
15th Nov 2014 9:26pm
love how you pulled off the repetition without succumbing to being shallow or cliche.
you kept it witty and insightful, nice work
you kept it witty and insightful, nice work
15th Nov 2014 9:33pm
Thank you so much, miki! You made me thoroughly happy with your kind words, coming from a wonderful poetess like you!
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19th Nov 2014 7:38pm
Thanks a lot, dear Spanker! Perhaps a little kitchy but at least it's how I felt deep inside.
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11th Dec 2014 11:51am
Really? That makes me happy! It is perhaps a little clichéd but when it came to my mind I didn't think so :-). Thanks a lot, Sara!
