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Flawless Luv
lay your heart in my chest
so mine can gently hug yours
keep it feeling an ever growing luv
which with each smile from your soul
ignites a secret flame deep within
for ever burning in honor of us
embellishing your name with fire
upon the deepest, most sacred part of me
a place I have trusted only you to enter
cause you have truly luved me
with all my downfalls and faults
your luv has made me flawless
so mine can gently hug yours
keep it feeling an ever growing luv
which with each smile from your soul
ignites a secret flame deep within
for ever burning in honor of us
embellishing your name with fire
upon the deepest, most sacred part of me
a place I have trusted only you to enter
cause you have truly luved me
with all my downfalls and faults
your luv has made me flawless
Published 11th Nov 2014
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11th Nov 2014 3:41am
11th Nov 2014 3:49am
Sexy Lena.....you are always so kind.....thank your for the big smile upon my heart. So happy you like this one....felt fantastic to write. Xo :)
11th Nov 2014 3:47am
11th Nov 2014 3:50am
Awe Sweet X.....you are so right....thank you for awesome words you leave me. Xo :)
11th Nov 2014 4:07am
a place I have trusted
only you to enter .....
if all women did this
i bet divorce would be ZERO
and AIDS /HIV obsolete
but
that's all in ones imagination
gals like you may be found
in caves
or the GOLDEN Canyons
ooooooo N L Y
only you to enter .....
if all women did this
i bet divorce would be ZERO
and AIDS /HIV obsolete
but
that's all in ones imagination
gals like you may be found
in caves
or the GOLDEN Canyons
ooooooo N L Y
12th Nov 2014 2:14am
Oh Again.....this response tickled me.....appreciate your words very much.....thank you my friend. Xo :)
12th Nov 2014 4:19pm
ur poetry is wonderful
i often go to a flower shop
where i see a gal mostly
and i think is it you?
lovely gals only
also some guys attend
who r more beautifuller too
but they are sweet kids
for me
i often go to a flower shop
where i see a gal mostly
and i think is it you?
lovely gals only
also some guys attend
who r more beautifuller too
but they are sweet kids
for me
12th Nov 2014 4:23pm
13th Nov 2014 3:20pm
11th Nov 2014 5:18am
......and I'm in luv that you stopped by my way.....thank you Sweet Brinda.....honored to see you and for the RL add on!! Xo :)
11th Nov 2014 6:08am
Absolutely true, its love that makes us Flawless...
awesome write Flower.....
BrrrRrrrrHhhh
awesome write Flower.....
BrrrRrrrrHhhh
12th Nov 2014 2:20am
Sweet Friend.....yes it does....when the other person luves all there sides of you....truly awesome for sure. Thank you for your words. Xo :)
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22nd Jan 2015 1:52am
Sweet S......I have learned most lessons the hard way......this one was easy for a change......it's not how you luv physically.....or even passionate words said that makes luv flawless.....it's how a precious soul makes you feel happy....calm.....peaceful deep inside in that place where no one else has bothered to invade.....that is real luv.....thank you for your most valuable words.....honored by the RL add on...xo :)
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22nd Jan 2015 2:39am
I can so understand that......its hard when one soul has stomped you.....another comes along who is totally opposite......your heart tells you it can't be true.....cause it's pain reminds you that you were here before.....the memory puts you into reverse real quick.....tears barracade you from taking a chance......YEP.....know it....all tooooooo well.....sending healing thoughts your way.....xo :)
