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When You Break It All Down...
Seasons bring the elements weather changes
less of the adventurers seeking open ranges
I have a quiet storm that has a focal point of one
can be energized with or without the sun
It takes power from the nuances of you
determination steady regardless of what the wind blows through
for the reward is worth the fight
and what you are moaning all night
Ceremony can be private or public I don't care
as long as I feel your embrace I am lighter then air
for many a men can whisper and tell you lies
but what you need is actually between my thighs
less of the adventurers seeking open ranges
I have a quiet storm that has a focal point of one
can be energized with or without the sun
It takes power from the nuances of you
determination steady regardless of what the wind blows through
for the reward is worth the fight
and what you are moaning all night
Ceremony can be private or public I don't care
as long as I feel your embrace I am lighter then air
for many a men can whisper and tell you lies
but what you need is actually between my thighs
Published 11th Nov 2014
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11th Nov 2014 2:59am
11th Nov 2014 3:42am
with many of my poems, the line between fiction and reality isn't that clear, unless it is about politics.
Thanks for the read
Thanks for the read
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12th Nov 2014 8:39pm
"For what you need is actually between my thighs". I like this line. Good write.
12th Nov 2014 11:42pm
Believe or not I was actually trying to incorporate "In Your Eyes" in there from Peter Gabriel's song, but the words didn't seem to gel as nicely.
17th Jan 2015 2:28pm
Very romantic start that leads to the xxx. Love it! Reminds me of a first date that lasted a weekend.
17th Jan 2015 4:48pm
wow I have a lot to learn; I am lucky if I even get the courage up to go in for a kiss!
11th Nov 2017 5:38pm
Your hesitation only makes you that more of a romantic. According to Hitch, lean in part way.
11th Nov 2017 9:56pm
