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Luv In Your Eye's
you're so amazing
how one sigh of yours
makes my heart squirm
look deep in your eye's
see so much untamed passion
looking back into mine
your spirit inhaling
my every exhale
we breathe as one soul
I never question calmness
when luv in your eye's
totally captivates me
how one sigh of yours
makes my heart squirm
look deep in your eye's
see so much untamed passion
looking back into mine
your spirit inhaling
my every exhale
we breathe as one soul
I never question calmness
when luv in your eye's
totally captivates me
Published 8th Nov 2014
| Edited 9th Nov 2014
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8th Nov 2014 7:24am
It's like no matter what I am going through at any given moment, I read your poems and feel so calm and peaceful...lol
Thank you sweetheart!
Thank you sweetheart!
Sexy Lena.....you brought a tear and smile upon my heart. Thank you for sharing your beautiful thoughts with me.....I'm glad I can still write and move souls. Luv and hugs sent your way....xo :)
8th Nov 2014 8:41am
8th Nov 2014 10:48pm
Sweet Malin......honored by the RL add on. Appreciate your beautiful words you've left me. So happy you enjoyed this one. Xo :)
8th Nov 2014 4:12pm
I love the lines "your spirit inhaling/my every exhale/we believe as one soul." Really fine.
8th Nov 2014 10:53pm
Oh crowfly my friend.....I'm humbled by your response. Thank you so very much. Xo :)
9th Nov 2014 11:59am
Damn flower... You sure as hell know
or should know that you've got the market cornered
on sweet loving pieces of poetry! Awesomeness! :)
or should know that you've got the market cornered
on sweet loving pieces of poetry! Awesomeness! :)
10th Nov 2014 4:44am
Well Sugar Plum.....I know it now....LOL!! You got me excited....I do mean EXCITED!!! What awesomeness your words make me feel. Thank you for much happiness your comment has made me feel. Xo :)
9th Nov 2014 10:59pm
10th Nov 2014 4:45am
Holy Purple!!!! Now this is a compliment when your wordless.....thank you!!! Xo :)
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11th Nov 2014 1:49am
Ooooo......I take all prisoners and explain later......thank you wonderful friend. Xo :)
17th Oct 2015 1:19am
So beautiful and sensual,
I admire the imagery you create in here,
I also loved the picture you chose to put along with this.
Great job :)
I admire the imagery you create in here,
I also loved the picture you chose to put along with this.
Great job :)
