River Rouse

Thank you Gabriel!

Brief and brilliant.  

thanks!

Wows
Nice lines

thanks

Not a bad poem at all! Its' brevity in no way detracts from its' meaningfulness. Well written, and filled with plenty of fiery depth! :)

Thank you Jessica

the format..that repetition with inclusions in the latter half..could feel the depths you have tactfully wrapped in such shortness. Loved the chaos captured..reads like a lucid human need in disguised asking..and that (to be)settling~sterile philosophical thought phase in 'nonexistence'. loved how you have flown at ease water n calmness in darkness (and/or anger?) shades.title strikes more than the verses as usual to ur mastery. an intense piece Ophie! Glad to hav this in my list:)

Uma, your comments mean the world to me!
Thank you- as if that's enough

marvelous

thank you

Wow!!!
W for Women
O for Opheliac
W for wonderful:)

Wow Anando! thanks for the acronym

I love this. You captured it perfectly.

appreciated

u unthroat so many

thank you.

thank u for d thank u  

no more of ur briefies?

I just hope that "non existence" doesn't mean death.  Maybe it just means forgetting about yourself and the woes of the world.  Never mind shooting the rapids.

it can mean many things and not just death.
perhaps a change in identity...

The ying and yang of it. Enjoyed.

Yin and Yang, that's an interesting way of reading it.
thank you

Opheliac......you're a very talented writer......such heart tugging ink with just a few words......enjoyed.....purple hugs xo :)

flowergirl you are so kind in your words.
bless you