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So stupid - Senryu
It would be stupid
Warned Brain, supported by Heart
Shut up, shouted Flesh
Warned Brain, supported by Heart
Shut up, shouted Flesh
Published 3rd Nov 2014
| Edited 7th Nov 2014
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3rd Nov 2014 4:42pm
Thank you so much for your lovely words, JeJe! Flesh is a little rude, isn't it?
3rd Nov 2014 7:13pm
Yup, you're right
Soooo listen n come
give that big ole kiss you
know you gotta have! lol
Seriously, an unusual
but very well done ink...
Soooo listen n come
give that big ole kiss you
know you gotta have! lol
Seriously, an unusual
but very well done ink...
3rd Nov 2014 7:49pm
Hahaha! You're so cute, dear Poe. Love your great and sweets words. An unusual ink? Well, just body language :-)
3rd Nov 2014 5:04pm
And it is, Paul, it is ...
Thank you for sharing my thoughts
and the RL add :-).
Thank you for sharing my thoughts
and the RL add :-).
Anonymous
3rd Nov 2014 5:52pm
and the body betrays..Powerful and to the point Ms. Chi, Brilliant!!!
3rd Nov 2014 6:56pm
Coming from you, vee, I take it as a big compliment and like to thank you from the bottom of my heart. The body is a cunning cheater ...
3rd Nov 2014 6:36pm
3rd Nov 2014 6:58pm
Haikus are mostly simple. That's the reason why I love them so much :-). Thank you, Smith998.
3rd Nov 2014 9:03pm
3rd Nov 2014 9:09pm
4th Nov 2014 6:15am
Lead us not.. Amen.
The haiku also reminded me of the opening lines of Robbie Williams song "Sin, sin, sin" - "Don't let the eyes tell the brain you should be ashamed".
The haiku also reminded me of the opening lines of Robbie Williams song "Sin, sin, sin" - "Don't let the eyes tell the brain you should be ashamed".
4th Nov 2014 6:38am
That's a nice opening. Have to hear that song though not a real Robbie Williams fan :-).
3rd Nov 2014 10:04pm
3rd Nov 2014 11:05pm
SweetOblivion, thank you so much for stopping by and leaving such a lovely comment! Appreciate it very much!
3rd Nov 2014 10:06pm
3rd Nov 2014 11:06pm
3rd Nov 2014 10:53pm
Sometimes your body just has a one track mind...lol
You are sexy and in control no matter what ;)
You are sexy and in control no matter what ;)
3rd Nov 2014 11:04pm
I doubt that my body has anything like a mind at the moment, Lena! HAhaha!
Thank you, mi hermana, for showering me with such nice words :-). Appreciate you very much!
Thank you, mi hermana, for showering me with such nice words :-). Appreciate you very much!
4th Nov 2014 7:24am
4th Nov 2014 7:41am
Yes, yes, if corporal temptations are involved, mankind has always been caught between the devil and the deep blue sea :-). Thank you, John, for your nice comment!
4th Nov 2014 5:34pm
I love senryu, especially yours, Miss Chi, in 17 syllabes to say how many truth! Incredible. Thank you!
Thank YOU, dear malin. I appreciate your love for haikus and senryus and your absolutely kind comment on my latest one :-). Btw, thanks a lot for the RL entry!
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4th Nov 2014 8:51pm
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4th Nov 2014 10:52pm
HAhaha! That's great! The Carnal Trinity! You made my day, Gabriel. Thank you so much!
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Anonymous
5th Nov 2014 8:52am
Body language,great lines,dear Chi...
5th Nov 2014 6:07pm
Yessssssss ... Body language without brain participation :-). Thanks, dear Fay (I like Le Fay best, to be honest)
6th Nov 2014 5:57pm
7th Nov 2014 12:33pm
Thanks a lot, Lance! Always great to hear from you :-)! Glad you loved the read!
Anonymous
7th Nov 2014 3:50am
Miss Chi,
.....because sometimes giving in to the temptations of the flesh is just a hell of a lot more fun ! LOL!!! Enjoyed!
tornado
.....because sometimes giving in to the temptations of the flesh is just a hell of a lot more fun ! LOL!!! Enjoyed!
tornado
7th Nov 2014 12:40pm
That's exactly what Flesh thinks about it :-). Perhaps Flesh is able to convince Brain and Heart to just shut up and jump in a lake. Glad you enjoyed!
8th Nov 2014 6:06pm
9th Nov 2014 12:09pm
Flesh thinks it's smart. I think Brain and Heart are smarter but will be overruled nonetheless :-). Thanks, forever_young for your lovely comment!.
8th Nov 2014 8:10pm
9th Nov 2014 12:10pm
That's a common truth, Tristique :-). Let's enjoy stupidity from time to time! Thanks for stopping by and leaving such a nice comment!
9th Dec 2014 9:25pm
11th Dec 2014 11:59am
I suppose we all have! And the result is always surprising, depending on which of the rivaling participants wins :-).
