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Like the Flame
I wrote to you last night,
thoughts naked as I;
Like the flame,
the backdrop to my spirited libido,
hot to the touch,
melting my core between waxing lyrical
salacious suggestive syllables, fluent in liquid love;
Like the flame,
the ink of me, hot for you, always to be.
thoughts naked as I;
Like the flame,
the backdrop to my spirited libido,
hot to the touch,
melting my core between waxing lyrical
salacious suggestive syllables, fluent in liquid love;
Like the flame,
the ink of me, hot for you, always to be.
Published 3rd Nov 2014
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3rd Nov 2014 2:25pm
You think of the best things when you are naked ;)
Love the line "fluid in liquid love"
Love the line "fluid in liquid love"
3rd Nov 2014 3:10pm
i think of him mainly when i'm naked
it's just as it is, the best thing is him
thank you Lena
it's just as it is, the best thing is him
thank you Lena
3rd Nov 2014 3:00pm
This is. A beautiful use of language, Rose! I love the term "spiritual libido,"
3rd Nov 2014 3:11pm
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4th Nov 2014 7:41am
there's more to be written John
why put a full stop to something so beautiful as love
glad you liked it xD
why put a full stop to something so beautiful as love
glad you liked it xD
