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Treats
Halloween is approaching Sir
Your lil grl has lots of candy to offer
You do not have to trick me
I'll gladly give you my treats
Every bite is oh so sweet
A confection perfection just for you
Totally and completely irresistable
To all of your sensabilities
How should I dress up hun?
Tell me exactly what you want to see
As your very well aware of
This lil girl aims to please
Mmmmmm....I bet I know
What you really long for a nibble of Sir
How does my lil candy apple bum sound?
Bending over.....take a lil sample
Your lil grl has lots of candy to offer
You do not have to trick me
I'll gladly give you my treats
Every bite is oh so sweet
A confection perfection just for you
Totally and completely irresistable
To all of your sensabilities
How should I dress up hun?
Tell me exactly what you want to see
As your very well aware of
This lil girl aims to please
Mmmmmm....I bet I know
What you really long for a nibble of Sir
How does my lil candy apple bum sound?
Bending over.....take a lil sample
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Re: Treats
Anonymous
30th Oct 2014 7:42pm
Belle,
Yee-Haa!!! Now that does put a 'hole 'nother spin on bobbing for apples! LOL!!! I think youre gonna be running out of candy very early tomorrow night ; )
tornado
Yee-Haa!!! Now that does put a 'hole 'nother spin on bobbing for apples! LOL!!! I think youre gonna be running out of candy very early tomorrow night ; )
tornado
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30th Oct 2014 7:48pm
Oh Mr Tornado thats just my pre-Halloween appetizer hun. Plus my pantry is always full of plenty of treats
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30th Oct 2014 9:03pm
I guess I better make a dentist appointment before I come eat on your candy.
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30th Oct 2014 9:32pm
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30th Oct 2014 11:54pm
very cute & sexy poem, Belle. your perfect costume would be Eve in the Garden, not original, but highly entertaining!...
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1st Nov 2014 8:00pm
One question about my costume Mr Feddeler..
Should it b pre or post fig leaf hun?
Glad u found it enjoyable sir
Should it b pre or post fig leaf hun?
Glad u found it enjoyable sir
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31st Oct 2014 3:12am
What a playfully sexy, seductive piece...it makes me tingle and smile. Brava dear LSB.
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1st Nov 2014 8:02pm
Always a good day when i know i brought about a smile
Thank you darlin
Thank you darlin
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1st Nov 2014 8:05pm
I take my dear PM that from that statement u like the pic ;-)
Thanx for ur sexy comment hun
Thanx for ur sexy comment hun
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