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Loves Immortality
we drifted through on the easterly currents, falling
with the first signs of autumn, carried on the backs
of migrating lovers flown over from southern shores,
filtering through the ages in timeless capsules, the
sand beneath our feet, the breath of twilight from a
dying sunset filling our lungs, rejoicing on the prow,
cutting a swathe through time, as if time itself was
but a lonesome traveler with no place to call home.
with the first signs of autumn, carried on the backs
of migrating lovers flown over from southern shores,
filtering through the ages in timeless capsules, the
sand beneath our feet, the breath of twilight from a
dying sunset filling our lungs, rejoicing on the prow,
cutting a swathe through time, as if time itself was
but a lonesome traveler with no place to call home.
Published 30th Oct 2014
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Anonymous
30th Oct 2014 1:03pm
Great visualization...
30th Oct 2014 3:17pm
Anonymous
30th Oct 2014 9:39pm
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31st Oct 2014 5:20am
1st Nov 2014 6:01am
Why thankyou John
yes of all of my weeks scribblings i like this one the most
surprisingly quick to write it out too, well i was surprised
I'm sure someone will somewhere copy and paste and call it their own work
yes of all of my weeks scribblings i like this one the most
surprisingly quick to write it out too, well i was surprised
I'm sure someone will somewhere copy and paste and call it their own work
