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Dear Fate....
I don't know what to do or say,
To keep my feelings I feel at bay
The tears stream down from my eyes
I continue to cry,I'm paralyzed....
I want to comitt suicide
Will you let me die this time?
Through each day and night I pay the price
These emotions that hide are undignified
I identify with an uncertainty that cowers inside
My dreams aren't within reach,I'm too fucking weak
So I wait here in the dark cause I want to die.
Will you let me kill my self this time?
I'm so unhappy that I hurt like it can't get more worse
Every time someone tries to change my mind I curse
It's too late to change my ways,my world still decay's
I'm not no basket case,I just want my existence to erase
I want to die to take my self away from this fucking place.
There are no more emotions to be expressed on my face
So please will you all let me die this time?
To keep my feelings I feel at bay
The tears stream down from my eyes
I continue to cry,I'm paralyzed....
I want to comitt suicide
Will you let me die this time?
Through each day and night I pay the price
These emotions that hide are undignified
I identify with an uncertainty that cowers inside
My dreams aren't within reach,I'm too fucking weak
So I wait here in the dark cause I want to die.
Will you let me kill my self this time?
I'm so unhappy that I hurt like it can't get more worse
Every time someone tries to change my mind I curse
It's too late to change my ways,my world still decay's
I'm not no basket case,I just want my existence to erase
I want to die to take my self away from this fucking place.
There are no more emotions to be expressed on my face
So please will you all let me die this time?
Published 28th Oct 2014
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28th Oct 2014 6:01pm
Wonderful write. thank you for sharing , this is exactly how I feel everyday . Just a pity though sigh .
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14th Nov 2014 9:46am
Dude
Wow
This is really a mind drainer in a way that your emptying out your bad thoughts and how you feel.
I tried to commit suicide twice and theirs not a day I think about suicide, but then again I always feel, know and see a small ray of light.
Like you said bro, life isn't all happyness.
But rest assured, writing helps a lot and that why I do it, it's my thearepy and it's a passion.
Wow
This is really a mind drainer in a way that your emptying out your bad thoughts and how you feel.
I tried to commit suicide twice and theirs not a day I think about suicide, but then again I always feel, know and see a small ray of light.
Like you said bro, life isn't all happyness.
But rest assured, writing helps a lot and that why I do it, it's my thearepy and it's a passion.
