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Forbidden Fruit
Take off my satin robe
Peel me like an apple
It hits the sheets
Exposing the sweet fruit below
Take a bite
As hard as you would like
Don't be shy hun
Eat it all up
I'm not selfsh or stingy
I love sharing with you
Come up to meet my lips
I want a taste too
Mmmmmmm.....such a treat
When experienced upon your lips
Makes me hungry to sample
Every inch of you
Oh yes I need
Your essence and seed
Filling me up
May I have it Sir?
Peel me like an apple
It hits the sheets
Exposing the sweet fruit below
Take a bite
As hard as you would like
Don't be shy hun
Eat it all up
I'm not selfsh or stingy
I love sharing with you
Come up to meet my lips
I want a taste too
Mmmmmmm.....such a treat
When experienced upon your lips
Makes me hungry to sample
Every inch of you
Oh yes I need
Your essence and seed
Filling me up
May I have it Sir?
Published 27th Oct 2014
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27th Oct 2014 5:52pm
GULP!! Mmmmmm it's such fruit...
Hhmmmm? Oh my bad I was eating
Fruit, a juicy peach while I read this lol
jk... Very hot stuff! :)
Hhmmmm? Oh my bad I was eating
Fruit, a juicy peach while I read this lol
jk... Very hot stuff! :)
27th Oct 2014 7:01pm
27th Oct 2014 6:03pm
27th Oct 2014 7:02pm
27th Oct 2014 6:07pm
I love the juicy fruit imagery in this piece...you are a master at painting sensual scenes, so tactile and vivid.
28th Oct 2014 8:55pm
Anonymous
27th Oct 2014 6:38pm
Belle,
Howdy....my friends call me Johnny Appleseed! LOL!!! JK! Delicious write
You had me
At first bite! :-)
tornado
Howdy....my friends call me Johnny Appleseed! LOL!!! JK! Delicious write
You had me
At first bite! :-)
tornado
28th Oct 2014 8:56pm
Anonymous
27th Oct 2014 8:36pm
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28th Oct 2014 8:58pm
27th Oct 2014 9:10pm
The title's idea that it's forbidden makes it all the more tantalizing, but most of the lines suggest a gift. Thank you.
29th Oct 2014 11:38am
So very true darlin....and very perceptive of you. Those who know me well know that I am a giver hun
Glad u enjoyed my lil write
Glad u enjoyed my lil write
When it's forbidden, It makes the fruit that much sweeter. Nibble all you want Belle.
28th Oct 2014 9:00pm
29th Oct 2014 3:44am
that's a very direct offer, Belle, it certainly arouses pangs of hunger...
29th Oct 2014 11:56am
I can only say hun....i hope that he feels the same
Thanx for giving my lil write a read
Thanx for giving my lil write a read
29th Oct 2014 1:54pm
The Forbidden Fruit so nice to eat. It is joy and fun though it is forbidden.ahhh-- everlasting apetite!!!!!!
29th Oct 2014 2:11pm
