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nicotine poisoning
maybe i'm the only one
but that's been happening a lot lately
the first clip of the morning
before even the first beer
becomes the guilt trip
memory stick
obsessing and over analyzing
every move ever made
yellowish burnt sienna callouses
a problem
on the inner thighs of my peace sign
that no anti bacterial gojo
with a bleach additive
could ever solve
i hate it
but i bet i'll do it again tomorrow
but that's been happening a lot lately
the first clip of the morning
before even the first beer
becomes the guilt trip
memory stick
obsessing and over analyzing
every move ever made
yellowish burnt sienna callouses
a problem
on the inner thighs of my peace sign
that no anti bacterial gojo
with a bleach additive
could ever solve
i hate it
but i bet i'll do it again tomorrow
Published 23rd Oct 2014
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Habits die hard eh. I know how that feels...knowing you shouldn't but doing it anyway:) John.
24th Oct 2014 00:39am
not jus the habit but the actual nicotine does something to me itself,mentally, like hangover anxiety, obsessive over every fault, need a fn xanax style....
i hate it....
thanx for reading grace....
i hate it....
thanx for reading grace....
re: Re: nicotine poisoning
24th Oct 2014 4:53pm
24th Oct 2014 8:07am
"yellowish burnt sienna callouses
a problem
on the inner thighs of my peace sign
that no anti bacterial gojo
with a bleach additive
could ever solve" Great lines and damn right!
Nice write man!
a problem
on the inner thighs of my peace sign
that no anti bacterial gojo
with a bleach additive
could ever solve" Great lines and damn right!
Nice write man!
24th Oct 2014 8:36am
24th Oct 2014 9:45pm
25th Oct 2014 7:06am
25th Oct 2014 7:33am
I don't know what the go is, maybe it's the change of seasons, but I was visiting friends [smokers] last week and I started smoking like a pro again with a smoke in one hand and a drink in the other, even smoked those european stylish thin lady cigarettes, whatever they stuck in front of me... then I flew home and quit. It's good to breathe again. Enough rambling from me. I have to say, JR, I've noticed a lot of changes in your writing, could be you're spending more time editing, playing around with structure and refining your style, it's definitely showing whatever you're doing, man. Great stuff!
28th Oct 2014 9:25pm
yeah man cigs i hate em
thanx alex
i'm glad the recent tinkerin is workin for ya man..
good to hear
thanx alex
i'm glad the recent tinkerin is workin for ya man..
good to hear
28th Oct 2014 10:59pm
I wouldn't have no idea of the struggle to quit, but I do know how difficult it is to go without chocolate.
You say it so well here John, so it does give me a great insight.
You say it so well here John, so it does give me a great insight.
29th Oct 2014 00:28am
31st Oct 2014 4:24am
Every bleak day, everything you speak and spray, feels like a familiar blues prayer.
Another strong inimitable release, brother from another gutter!
Keep doing you. Nobody else does it the same, man.
Another strong inimitable release, brother from another gutter!
Keep doing you. Nobody else does it the same, man.
