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NEAVEH
The Image of her lingers in my reality.
She was half of me and half of him.
Her eyes Calming as they meet mine...
Strong and Steady heart beat sounded just as his.
Mine slowly sank.
Every inch of her 6ilbs body glowing felt as soft silk my
lips meet her forehead, my hands ran across it
Her instantly still glaring up at me innocent and helpless
killing me.
She had to leave me BROKEN unable to cop, my insides screaming.
I need her!
She was the DreaM that i should of never let only be the most amazing dream. Her name was Neaveh.
She was half of me and half of him.
Her eyes Calming as they meet mine...
Strong and Steady heart beat sounded just as his.
Mine slowly sank.
Every inch of her 6ilbs body glowing felt as soft silk my
lips meet her forehead, my hands ran across it
Her instantly still glaring up at me innocent and helpless
killing me.
She had to leave me BROKEN unable to cop, my insides screaming.
I need her!
She was the DreaM that i should of never let only be the most amazing dream. Her name was Neaveh.
Published 22nd Oct 2014
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22nd Oct 2014 5:41am
'half of me & half of him': hermaphroditically appealing. she comes across as real, even if you conjured her.
you could clean it up a little ('cop' shld be 'cope') to bring it to awesome status. or just leave it, it's still intriguing...
you could clean it up a little ('cop' shld be 'cope') to bring it to awesome status. or just leave it, it's still intriguing...
22nd Oct 2014 9:55am
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