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Ferocious Soul
You...
Have a Ferocious soul...
I feel it as you roar
through your words
Ripping verbs & Nouns
right off the page...
Beautiful Creature
Your words strike a place
inside that transforms me
Into .. A Better me
You... Have a Ferocious soul
Regal and Wise...
You spit truth
Like liars spit lies
Your Words...
They Mesmerize
and remind me
that you are an old soul
living inside the mind
Of each phrase & line
You write...
Your profoundness
Gives me Mystical Insight
Makes me raise my fist
and want to join you in your fight
For whats right...
Passion deep in my soul
is what you ignite
A Lyrical Genius
As your Words take flight
So much energy between us
It leaves me wide awake at night
As my mind shys away
from possibilities...
I force my self to stay
grounded in sound realities
I know something... about you
and its a secret deep...
and I can still hear your voice
when I go to sleep....
You... Have a Ferocious Soul
Spirit ... made of Platinum
Heart... Made of Gold
I'm not supposed to feel this way
At least thats what I tell myself
Yet knowing you I know...
Is very good for my health
You are a Ferocious Soul
and I'm looking forward
to what...the future holds
I've learned not to be afraid
Just cant let my feelings show...
It so soon...but you still
Make my soul glow...
Yes You...
Have a ferocious Soul
Have a Ferocious soul...
I feel it as you roar
through your words
Ripping verbs & Nouns
right off the page...
Beautiful Creature
Your words strike a place
inside that transforms me
Into .. A Better me
You... Have a Ferocious soul
Regal and Wise...
You spit truth
Like liars spit lies
Your Words...
They Mesmerize
and remind me
that you are an old soul
living inside the mind
Of each phrase & line
You write...
Your profoundness
Gives me Mystical Insight
Makes me raise my fist
and want to join you in your fight
For whats right...
Passion deep in my soul
is what you ignite
A Lyrical Genius
As your Words take flight
So much energy between us
It leaves me wide awake at night
As my mind shys away
from possibilities...
I force my self to stay
grounded in sound realities
I know something... about you
and its a secret deep...
and I can still hear your voice
when I go to sleep....
You... Have a Ferocious Soul
Spirit ... made of Platinum
Heart... Made of Gold
I'm not supposed to feel this way
At least thats what I tell myself
Yet knowing you I know...
Is very good for my health
You are a Ferocious Soul
and I'm looking forward
to what...the future holds
I've learned not to be afraid
Just cant let my feelings show...
It so soon...but you still
Make my soul glow...
Yes You...
Have a ferocious Soul
Published 21st Oct 2014
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21st Oct 2014 4:12pm
21st Oct 2014 5:30pm
21st Oct 2014 4:51pm
How wonderful it is when you can see someone's soul, still hear their voice as you try to sleep. A soul regal and wise that also gives you passion.
If this is a hint of your muse, you are a woman in an amazing high and I'm excited for you ; )
If this is a hint of your muse, you are a woman in an amazing high and I'm excited for you ; )
21st Oct 2014 5:31pm
22nd Oct 2014 6:44am
Moving work, with so much fire and mirror walking intertwined. One of those pieces that climbs a ladder from start to finish
Thanks for releasing this one, Kandi!
Thanks for releasing this one, Kandi!
22nd Oct 2014 9:56pm
This was very eloquent
and written with a gracious
kind of style.
Watchmanofthespirit
and written with a gracious
kind of style.
Watchmanofthespirit
24th Oct 2014 2:01pm
24th Oct 2014 1:50am
24th Oct 2014 2:01pm
