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Elements
Elements of your love, coursing through my veins like the periodic table,
my mind at best, an untidy bedsit in the street walker part of town, but I
have you, breathing for me, cleaning house, gathering up my thoughts into
some semblance of calm instruction, until I'm able to breathe with you once
again.
Published 18th Oct 2014
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18th Oct 2014 8:26am
a brief stroll into elemental passion, altho I linger in the street walker part of town...
18th Oct 2014 12:23pm
Rose, I really like the metaphor of your mind as an untidy bedsit...a beautiful place to spend an afternoons and long into the evening.
19th Oct 2014 8:14am
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