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Do druggies win?
Is Joy the ultimate destination?
Am I in a continual grieve
No easy thing accepting my denial
And could I even give that up?
To move on to the next
So many lovelies to choose from
He says making people out of objects
The PC arguing otherwise
Must be overdue for a question mark?
That’s better
Joy
Am I in a continual grieve
No easy thing accepting my denial
And could I even give that up?
To move on to the next
So many lovelies to choose from
He says making people out of objects
The PC arguing otherwise
Must be overdue for a question mark?
That’s better
Joy
Published 17th Oct 2014
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18th Oct 2014 1:13am
21st Oct 2014 3:18pm
There is nothing like a good question to make your mark; to be... continuing; do you know anything about escape velocity? That's my next piece. Drugs are a cop-out; if the neighbors smell it they'll send a cop out. I like your poem.
21st Oct 2014 3:26pm
Mmm? The ponderous Ms P. Guess it depends on what or whom one is escaping from (and through)? "Cop out" - clever & funny. Glad you liked my poem.
