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Emotional Titanic
darkness looming
forever dooming
heart sinking to the bottom
like an invisible titanic
in an ocean of emotions
sadness pain dispair
all having a killer flair
floats to the top
crashing with wave after wave
never receding
brain a confused mess
heart bleeding to death
turns the oceans red
happiness turning to lead
disappearing under the frigid waters
nevermore to be seen again
forever dooming
heart sinking to the bottom
like an invisible titanic
in an ocean of emotions
sadness pain dispair
all having a killer flair
floats to the top
crashing with wave after wave
never receding
brain a confused mess
heart bleeding to death
turns the oceans red
happiness turning to lead
disappearing under the frigid waters
nevermore to be seen again
Published 19th Apr 2011
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19th Apr 2011 4:38am
nina! its been forever since you have been on! this is an amazing poem! its got really good imagery and rhyming
22nd Apr 2011 10:31pm
i know dalton i sorry i have had writers block but im back mwhaha lol and thanks
22nd Apr 2011 11:03pm
love this poem a lot. been going through that a lot lately after my situation. great expression of emotion. can relate to this poem so i love it even more
