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YOU BLOW MY MIND
In this great world
of ambiguity and variety
we have found ourselves
clenched on the web of net
blindly chartering on a
discourse
making our home
in this wonderful place
of the deep underground.
The DUP community
is where minds are inspired
and wandering souls connect to
console and transpire
in love and pain
tears and laughter
with metaphors, smilies
and glorious symphonies.
Compliments a galore
opinions truckload
rude critiques are rare
but we end up learning
just the same
growing and sharing
true lessons in life
making friends in
all walks of life.
I've met the kindest,
most talented writers
from all corners
some far, some near
opening our minds
and hearts
to accept who we are
welcoming all with open hearts
In awe, I watch
LEGENDS
in the making
for dreamers to
never give up the
dream.
(Submitted in DUP ROCKS MY WORLD comp hosted by D_Poetic Engineer)
of ambiguity and variety
we have found ourselves
clenched on the web of net
blindly chartering on a
discourse
making our home
in this wonderful place
of the deep underground.
The DUP community
is where minds are inspired
and wandering souls connect to
console and transpire
in love and pain
tears and laughter
with metaphors, smilies
and glorious symphonies.
Compliments a galore
opinions truckload
rude critiques are rare
but we end up learning
just the same
growing and sharing
true lessons in life
making friends in
all walks of life.
I've met the kindest,
most talented writers
from all corners
some far, some near
opening our minds
and hearts
to accept who we are
welcoming all with open hearts
In awe, I watch
LEGENDS
in the making
for dreamers to
never give up the
dream.
(Submitted in DUP ROCKS MY WORLD comp hosted by D_Poetic Engineer)
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Re: YOU BLOW MY MIND
17th Oct 2014 1:09am
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17th Oct 2014 1:12am
Thank you my dear!
Coming from you, it's an honor.
Wanted to take the opportunity to say what DU means to me ; )
Coming from you, it's an honor.
Wanted to take the opportunity to say what DU means to me ; )
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17th Oct 2014 1:54am
LOL...what an honor coming from you REKS!
I kinda hope it at least captured what is true here. It's incredible to watch writers like you and be able to one day say.....I knew them when ; )
Your comments are always appreciated.
I kinda hope it at least captured what is true here. It's incredible to watch writers like you and be able to one day say.....I knew them when ; )
Your comments are always appreciated.
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17th Oct 2014 4:11am
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17th Oct 2014 11:50am
Amazing talents here indeed Reks!
The fact that you try to improves shows you are growing and soon you will see....in 6 months of even a year from the date you started, you will not believe how much you have grown......I've witnessed it happen before.
The fact that you try to improves shows you are growing and soon you will see....in 6 months of even a year from the date you started, you will not believe how much you have grown......I've witnessed it happen before.
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19th Oct 2014 00:38am
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17th Oct 2014 2:13am
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17th Oct 2014 11:46am
Re: YOU BLOW MY MIND
17th Oct 2014 5:23am
it's a fine tribute to our village. easy to get lost in the wonder of poetry, as we entertain each other...
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Thanks John, I hope this captured it because I certainly poured my heart out.
I have seen other sites and there is no other like this one. I am so proud to be in presence like you ; )
I have seen other sites and there is no other like this one. I am so proud to be in presence like you ; )
Re: YOU BLOW MY MIND
17th Oct 2014 5:48am
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17th Oct 2014 11:53am
Actually YOU ROCK!....lol
But I will revel in your compliment Fire
Thank you for the amazing comment ; )
But I will revel in your compliment Fire
Thank you for the amazing comment ; )
Re: YOU BLOW MY MIND
19th Oct 2014 9:49pm
That's a real ode to DU, Lena. I love your thoughts abour DU and all the talented poets as well as the positive feedback in general. xo
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re: Re: YOU BLOW MY MIND
20th Oct 2014 2:25pm
Gracias mi Hermana!
I must admit, you were part of the inspiration for writing this peace. Meeting wonderful powerful women like you is an incredible honor.
...and of course, I'm a huge fan...lol ; )
I must admit, you were part of the inspiration for writing this peace. Meeting wonderful powerful women like you is an incredible honor.
...and of course, I'm a huge fan...lol ; )
Re: YOU BLOW MY MIND
Anonymous
21st Oct 2014 4:26am
Sexy Lena.....this is a great write. You covered all the emotions of being here. Enjoyed! Xo :)
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re: Re: YOU BLOW MY MIND
21st Oct 2014 11:14am
I'm so glad you enjoyed it sweetheart!
It took a while to put it together just right, but I knew what was in my heart and hoped the words to show it ; )
Of course, you were part of that inspiration because of how warm you have been to me here. Always the kindest soul.
It took a while to put it together just right, but I knew what was in my heart and hoped the words to show it ; )
Of course, you were part of that inspiration because of how warm you have been to me here. Always the kindest soul.
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Anonymous
23rd Oct 2014 5:26pm
Only returning what has been given to me precious friend. Xo :)
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