for two days...

I will love you intensely for two days
for two days I will let you own every inch of me
every inch of me will burn for the darkness in your eyes
the darkness in your eyes will haunt my dreams
my dreams will breathe and pulse with the memory of your blood beneath my fingertips
beneath my fingertips I’ll remember how you’d bend and break and scream for my mercy
my mercy that was unforgiving and unrelenting
and unrelenting I’ll remember how I let you drown me in ecstasy and pain

for two days…

© Indie Adams 2014

Note: I have never written a poem like this before, so aside from content if you'd take a second to give me some feedback on how the style works for you, that'd be great. Thanks
Written by Indie (Miss Indie)
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