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Passion that Breathes Long
I've loved and lost
Then loved once more
Always had the capacity
To dust off and try again
All these years later
I look back fondly
At pieces of dreams
That became romances
For better or worse
From all of you
I took something
Looking back fondly
I smile and recollect
You touched me in ways
I still recall
You never left forever
Your memory etched
In a passion that breathes long
Then loved once more
Always had the capacity
To dust off and try again
All these years later
I look back fondly
At pieces of dreams
That became romances
For better or worse
From all of you
I took something
Looking back fondly
I smile and recollect
You touched me in ways
I still recall
You never left forever
Your memory etched
In a passion that breathes long
Published 13th Oct 2014
| Edited 14th Oct 2014
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13th Oct 2014 11:40pm
13th Oct 2014 11:53pm
14th Oct 2014 4:24am
it's a comfortable companion. those faces that stay beautiful as we drift along...
14th Oct 2014 4:28am
14th Oct 2014 7:44am
This is an interesting piece because it seems more often than not people only take the bad with them out of relationships and completely disregard the good. It's important to be realistic but to almost erase the good parts is quite sad. I too can recall special moments and I think reliving them is a pretty cool thing. However my perception of the person still remains tainted if things ended badly, but thankfully I can enjoy memories simply for what they are.
Anyway, I liked this one, I relate.
Anyway, I liked this one, I relate.
Glad you can relate.
There are a few women I would like to send this to, am wondering if I should ?
Thx
There are a few women I would like to send this to, am wondering if I should ?
Thx
14th Oct 2014 7:49am
You are a fucking genius, PS. I loved this. Its so true...I agree with how it made me feel while reading it. :)
14th Oct 2014 1:13pm
Thx so much. Love isn't always easy, but it's not to say you can't salvage some good from the difficult ...
14th Oct 2014 6:08pm
I thought this was more of a love category write...Doesn't matter.
Well done nice flow!!!
Well done nice flow!!!
14th Oct 2014 7:53pm
15th Oct 2014 1:44am
yes, we learn something from each love we have had. sometimes it takes a while to remember the memory with a smile rather than a tear....but worth it
15th Oct 2014 2:13am
We Scorpios work hard and love hard, even in loss sometimes there is victory...
15th Oct 2014 2:03pm
15th Oct 2014 5:11am
aww this is a sweet momento to the people that have touched your life. like very much =P
15th Oct 2014 11:48am
At a certain age, you can put your past loves in perspective, especially if you are in contact with them, as I am with several
Thx for reading 8
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Thx for reading 8
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Anonymous
15th Oct 2014 9:00pm
"You never left forever
Your memory etched "
These are my favorite lines. I'm glad I read this :)
Your memory etched "
These are my favorite lines. I'm glad I read this :)
15th Oct 2014 10:00pm
15th Oct 2014 11:54pm
The human condition fills this wonderful poem with life...and love.
Cheers...Harry
Cheers...Harry
16th Oct 2014 00:01am
Thx so much
I wrote it for some one specifically, have to find the right time to send it to her
I wrote it for some one specifically, have to find the right time to send it to her
16th Oct 2014 1:19am
16th Oct 2014 2:45am
16th Oct 2014 1:37pm
oh, and also wanted to say that your poem reminds me of one of my recent poems called Next to You....a time with a lover that I will treasure the memory for ever....thanks for your poems my fellow Scorpio : )
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