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How Far
in the quietness of night
you echo thru my thoughts
I contemplate distance between us
my heart pounding wildly
as to answer my pondering mind
it tells me......
"as close, as the heart, is to the soul"
so I look deep within me
where my heart and soul collide
there you are.....linking them together
you echo thru my thoughts
I contemplate distance between us
my heart pounding wildly
as to answer my pondering mind
it tells me......
"as close, as the heart, is to the soul"
so I look deep within me
where my heart and soul collide
there you are.....linking them together
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13th Oct 2014 10:50pm
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13th Oct 2014 11:06pm
I second, third, fourth, n fifth what PS just stated!
Take a bow my dear, this a treasure! :)
Take a bow my dear, this a treasure! :)
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.......and you my friend are a treasure to me. Thank you for the honorable words......but if I take a bow......will you NOT keep your hands in your pockets? LOL!!!! xo :) thank you for the honor of the RL. Xo
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14th Oct 2014 00:11am
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14th Oct 2014 11:55pm
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Anonymous
14th Oct 2014 3:15am
The word bears repeating for this one; beautiful!
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14th Oct 2014 11:56pm
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14th Oct 2014 6:10pm
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15th Oct 2014 00:00am
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14th Oct 2014 6:30pm
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15th Oct 2014 00:01am
No it's not...but I luved it when I saw it. I get my pics from "google images". Thank you for stopping my way. Xo :)
Re: How Far
14th Oct 2014 10:56pm
This is actually deep flower girl.
A lot of thoughts can be derived
from this.
Way to go.
Pan
A lot of thoughts can be derived
from this.
Way to go.
Pan
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15th Oct 2014 00:04am
You have been such an encouragement to me with your words. Thank you Sweet Soul for sharing your thoughts with me. Xo :)
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15th Oct 2014 9:55am
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15th Oct 2014 3:12pm
You are lovely......thank you so much for stopping my way once again. Always a pleasure. Xo :)
Re: How Far
15th Oct 2014 5:53pm
we all always read and learned
so much from your poetry
why have you deleted it all???
I wonder friendly one
I also have stopped posting
say well done
so much from your poetry
why have you deleted it all???
I wonder friendly one
I also have stopped posting
say well done
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re: Re: How Far
16th Oct 2014 2:43pm
Hey there.....sorry you're not posting any more. I had to start over. I wasn't going to post here any more but I had pleas from some people so I've posted new ones. Thank you for your gracious comment and your always concern. Xo :)
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16th Oct 2014 6:02pm
thanx
i have also stopped
my capacity reaches far and wide
all read me still
as on their loved ones
they all ride
astride
i have also stopped
my capacity reaches far and wide
all read me still
as on their loved ones
they all ride
astride
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21st Oct 2014 4:18am
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23rd Jan 2015 5:00am
since birth
erotica lay clothed
in your soul
whole
guys still remain in search of one
without a
W
erotica lay clothed
in your soul
whole
guys still remain in search of one
without a
W
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Re. How Far
28th Jun 2016 6:42pm
U DON'T COMMENT SO WHERE'S THE QS OF LAMENT
HIS COCK IS WIDE READ MY EROTICA ON A GUYS COCK HE SAID ITS SO WIDE
HIS COCK IS WIDE READ MY EROTICA ON A GUYS COCK HE SAID ITS SO WIDE
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Re. How Far
10th Aug 2016 9:30pm
Beautifully written, touched my soul to it's core....much love xo
~p.g
~p.g
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14th Aug 2016 2:38am
Hi Gawdess.......thank you so much for your visit and smile upon my page........I'm glad this touched you......I am always honored when a soul reads the oldies.....appreciate you......returning purple luv & hugs back your way xo :)
Re. How Far
18th Aug 2016 6:17pm
These are feelings I know so well, because we become part of our lover when our bodies embrace in passion, and our souls become one in love. Xo
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19th Aug 2016 3:13am
Gentle Soul.....isn't it a wonderful blessing to feel as one with your luver......glorious.....purple luv & hugs xo :)