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Its the little things
If you refuse
the premise of worth,
the value will
fall like a house of cards.
the premise of worth,
the value will
fall like a house of cards.
Published 13th Oct 2014
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13th Oct 2014 4:58pm
13th Oct 2014 9:36pm
I don't even know where to begin with you. ;)
I just spent about a minute trying really hard not to intellectually analyse your piece to threads. :p
Keep it up.
Duncan
I just spent about a minute trying really hard not to intellectually analyse your piece to threads. :p
Keep it up.
Duncan
13th Oct 2014 10:55pm
I'd like to be the joker in
the pack, but all I can do
is sit in the audience and
nod appreciatively..:)
the pack, but all I can do
is sit in the audience and
nod appreciatively..:)
uh.....'value'? 'worth'? pure subjectivity?
if I don't play cards, do I have no thing to be concerned about?
fortune cookie metaphor?
stock market tip?
--uh...just asking---
if I don't play cards, do I have no thing to be concerned about?
fortune cookie metaphor?
stock market tip?
--uh...just asking---
It's relative to all things yet truly subjective; it's a few different things for me, but one of the particulars is why we should never shun a carnation for favor of a rose. I'm writing the story for you, for what it's worth.
15th Oct 2014 12:52pm
14th Oct 2014 11:02pm
