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offered my broken soul
light slips through the canopy
crimson lips crackle
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LobodeSanPedro
Published
10th Oct 2014
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JohnFeddeler
10th Oct 2014 8:49pm
each line here has several interpretations, different as the readers who regard it. as a whole, it delivers its own incendiary devotion...
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LobodeSanPedro
11th Oct 2014 7:57pm
incendiary devotion ... You hit it right on the head.
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dartford
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11th Oct 2014 00:17am
I really like it, because when
I read it again it makes me
think of another way of
reading it, so I read it again..:)
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LobodeSanPedro
11th Oct 2014 2:55am
oddly enough that's how I felt when I wrote it ... one line took me here the other there ...
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