My first shapey poem

and what I feel is that dont take a leap into your future, do justice to what we are living for, because then only we can enjoy actually.

I like it because it sounds so vulnerable and you, by status quo, don't usually do the vulnerable. I think it was short enough for you to handle it. It's punchy. I'm never much good with offering critique or writing short work but hell, let's go with it. It's different and yes, I fear it.

good one.

why is this flagged as extreme content haha