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Sub Folders
Breathing, grasped, caressing you,
together with my thoughts, hope and desire,
folders within sub folders, seeing you
somewhere in-between want and need,
before going deeper underground.
Published 5th Oct 2014
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5th Oct 2014 1:34pm
5th Oct 2014 3:20pm
5th Oct 2014 3:44pm
Rose, this evokes in me, a computer geek, the fascinating idea of our brains as folder trees. All of our thoughts and feelings compartmentalized in folders and sub folders. Thanks for the think.
5th Oct 2014 7:42pm
Our emotions tend to get compartmentalized into folders
and sub folders
some we open with ease
some we'd rather not
and sub folders
some we open with ease
some we'd rather not
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5th Oct 2014 9:36pm
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