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99 Problems And Sex Ain't One
To some love is a game
Love 'em and leave 'em forget their name
Sex isn't worth the price you pay
Fucking someone new each day
Living life is worth far more
than playing this game as a whore
So let them be the one you marry
Instead of the fuck buddy whose number they carry
Calling to fuck anytime; day or night
Not even putting up a fight
I have enough problems without sex
See I'm far too complex
To settle for just sex, oh
I'm the girl who'd never go
All the way with some dude
Who acts rude and crude
I'm the girl who's legs are shut tight
Who sleeps instead of sexing all night
I'm different, I'm strange
I'm so out of range
I'm so out of your league
So sucker please leave
Love 'em and leave 'em forget their name
Sex isn't worth the price you pay
Fucking someone new each day
Living life is worth far more
than playing this game as a whore
So let them be the one you marry
Instead of the fuck buddy whose number they carry
Calling to fuck anytime; day or night
Not even putting up a fight
I have enough problems without sex
See I'm far too complex
To settle for just sex, oh
I'm the girl who'd never go
All the way with some dude
Who acts rude and crude
I'm the girl who's legs are shut tight
Who sleeps instead of sexing all night
I'm different, I'm strange
I'm so out of range
I'm so out of your league
So sucker please leave
Written by
BlueBeastGirl
(Beasty)
Published 2nd Oct 2014
| Edited 5th Oct 2014
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Re: 99 Problems And Sex Ain't One
2nd Oct 2014 9:00pm
....and writing good poems obviously doesn't belong to those 99 problems! Well done. :-)
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2nd Oct 2014 10:56pm
Re: 99 Problems And Sex Ain't One
Anonymous
2nd Oct 2014 9:54pm
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re: Re: 99 Problems And Sex Ain't One
2nd Oct 2014 10:54pm
Thank you for reading and commenting :) sometimes you just have let it all
Re: 99 Problems And Sex Ain't One
3rd Oct 2014 00:17am
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3rd Oct 2014 2:32am
Re: 99 Problems And Sex Ain't One
3rd Oct 2014 3:01am
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3rd Oct 2014 3:55am
Re: 99 Problems And Sex Ain't One
3rd Oct 2014 5:59am
Keep the need separate from the part that feeds. It's too easy to slip into a capricious skin dance. Getting to carve your own path, ruling over your desire until you never have to settle for less than everything? Now that's the attitude that'll keep you as a Queen and not as prey.
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3rd Oct 2014 6:34am
Re: 99 Problems And Sex Ain't One
Anonymous
- Edited 4th Oct 2014 10:53pm
4th Oct 2014 10:52pm
Nice write. Love to see the way you valued emotion.
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re: Re: 99 Problems And Sex Ain't One
4th Oct 2014 11:11pm
Thank you for reading my work and commenting. :) All my poems are based on emotions...
Re: 99 Problems And Sex Ain't One
5th Oct 2014 5:15pm
This is a really good poem (#girlpower) however it looks like there might be a few grammatical mistakes in there (sorry for nitpicking lol, I'm just a stickler for grammar). For example, in the 6th line should it be 'than' instead of 'then', and in the 8th line should it be 'whose' rather than 'whos'. I might be wrong about them, but oh well XD As I said though, a really good write from an amazing poet!
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re: Re: 99 Problems And Sex Ain't One
5th Oct 2014 7:44pm
I appreciate the corrections, You see I would never have noticed that. Thank you