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I see
I see:
You were telling me, all this time
I didn’t see, with my eyes
It’s just damn, damn: I did it again
I tried to hide my feelings
They keep slipping in
I see rings under your eyes
I see your being sleep deprived
I see I talk all the time
I see this was not fair, it is not right
You make the time, but what is the cost
Life is going so fast, it doesn’t wait
You’re in your place, and doing everything
I am here, and take your focus away
You were telling me, all this time
I didn’t see, with my eyes
It just damn, damn: I did it again
I tried to hide my feelings
They keep slipping in
Lori
You were telling me, all this time
I didn’t see, with my eyes
It’s just damn, damn: I did it again
I tried to hide my feelings
They keep slipping in
I see rings under your eyes
I see your being sleep deprived
I see I talk all the time
I see this was not fair, it is not right
You make the time, but what is the cost
Life is going so fast, it doesn’t wait
You’re in your place, and doing everything
I am here, and take your focus away
You were telling me, all this time
I didn’t see, with my eyes
It just damn, damn: I did it again
I tried to hide my feelings
They keep slipping in
Lori
Published 27th Sep 2014
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Anonymous
27th Sep 2014 11:51am
It sounds like someone saying they're taking up all of somebody's time... I like this but I don't think I have an appropriate comment, not without making myself a hypocrite. Excellent piece though!
28th Sep 2014 5:53pm
