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If you haven't seen Venice ...
Where the gondolier
belts out his sole mio
I'll take off my mask
--
Oh well, just heard that George Clooney marries his fiancée in Venice on Monday and is celebrating from this weekend on with galleons of imported tequila. There will be a delegacy from Hollywood as Brad Pitt, Angelina Jolie, Sandra Bullock and mucho more. That's shitty. So Venice will be crowded and we hoped that with the end of September less tourists would be coming to town. There will be road barriers and whatnotall. I'm not amused :-(. NOT A BIT! What will be left of Venice to discover? Sigh ...
belts out his sole mio
I'll take off my mask
--
Oh well, just heard that George Clooney marries his fiancée in Venice on Monday and is celebrating from this weekend on with galleons of imported tequila. There will be a delegacy from Hollywood as Brad Pitt, Angelina Jolie, Sandra Bullock and mucho more. That's shitty. So Venice will be crowded and we hoped that with the end of September less tourists would be coming to town. There will be road barriers and whatnotall. I'm not amused :-(. NOT A BIT! What will be left of Venice to discover? Sigh ...
Published 25th Sep 2014
| Edited 26th Sep 2014
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25th Sep 2014 7:16pm
La Serenissima has surely taken possession of more than one soul.
Mi piace questa poesìa! :-)
Mi piace questa poesìa! :-)
25th Sep 2014 7:47pm
I think so. I talked to many people who had been to Venice some day and they were crazy about it. As I'm a hobby photographer I'll probably take pictures the whole time:-).
Allora, mille grazie che ti piace la mia poesia :-)!
Allora, mille grazie che ti piace la mia poesia :-)!
Anonymous
25th Sep 2014 7:45pm
Miss Chi,
What ??? All this and you stripped of mask?!! Damn!
tornado
What ??? All this and you stripped of mask?!! Damn!
tornado
25th Sep 2014 7:52pm
Dear tornado!!! I'm afraid I haven't got that! Could you please be so kind and rephrase your doubtlessly cheeky answer??? Please :-)?
I'll look it up ... strip of mask ... Woe betide you!
I'll look it up ... strip of mask ... Woe betide you!
Anonymous
25th Sep 2014 8:15pm
Sorry for the confusion. Just a reference to you taking off your mask. Is this correct in that it sounds like you are leaving us ?
Ah! Now I see what you meant! No, I'm not leaving you for good just for a week's trip to Venice :-). It's good that we cleared up this misunderstanding :-). Just vacations, dear tornado ...
25th Sep 2014 8:36pm
25th Sep 2014 8:38pm
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25th Sep 2014 8:39pm
Ok, furrowed brow easing....sadness lifting! Cool sounding vacation! Now I can just be envious instead of sad...a void trade, right! So what are you hanging around here for, get out there and get your gondola on! LOL!!!
25th Sep 2014 8:44pm
Hahaha! Okay, it's my addemdum to the senryu, I see. I'll be leaving tomorrow evening,that's why. Time enough to hang around here and read and comment on your spectacular poems :-). Sadness lifting, that's sweet :-).
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25th Sep 2014 9:52pm
Thaaaaaaaaaank you so much, GAbriel! I will take my WB with me :-). Or ... better buy some there :-). Will have a cool time and thanks for your good wishes! HugZ
25th Sep 2014 10:15pm
26th Sep 2014 9:29am
Never been to Florence, been to Rome, that was amazinng, too. Bought some shoes, hahaha!
Thanks, dear Paul, I WILL have fun! Will take my camera with me, a fun guarantee!
Thanks, dear Paul, I WILL have fun! Will take my camera with me, a fun guarantee!
25th Sep 2014 10:48pm
I haven't been to Venice. They say it's a romantic city to visit but it's slowly slipping away. I hope it doesn't vanish before I get to see it. Have a great vacation Miss Chi.
26th Sep 2014 9:40am
Is there a quote saying something like "See Venice and die"? That's a crude translation from German and I know it's in no way adequate but is there anything similar in English? We'll see if Venice is really still romantic. There seem to be more tourists than Venice can bear ... Thanks for the good wishes, xmar82!!!
26th Sep 2014 3:15am
It's wonderful and inspiring , miss! Got to get back to it. A week is not long enough!
I hope it is! I've seen a Brunetti film by accident some day and was so fascinated by the old palazzos and the fragile bridges and the canales :-). So beautiful! So I booked a nice hotel and later informed my husband about our trip to Venice :-). I will certainly show some pics with my next poems!
26th Sep 2014 4:02pm
Take care with your camera miss. Mine was sheared from my body in a great carnival crowd at the train station. Small town country boy wasn't accustomed to the mass of people there during carnival! ( all is good. Had 4 other cameras)
26th Sep 2014 11:33am
Nope never been to Venice, EXCEPT in my dreams! lol
It does seen to be a magical place... Have a fun n safe trip my sweet one :)
It does seen to be a magical place... Have a fun n safe trip my sweet one :)
26th Sep 2014 11:44am
Thank you so much, Poe, my dear! There's no safe place in the world but fun I will have :-)!!! I'll send you some pics!
Anonymous
26th Sep 2014 7:16pm
However it is, vacation is always nice, enjoy!
27th Sep 2014 1:24am
28th Sep 2014 8:53am
Those gondoliers would have a few stories to tell. Luckily, they all being gentlemen ...
5th Oct 2014 11:48am
