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Just another broken soul
Just another broken soul
A hand suspended there to hold
As hollow as an empty shell
And lifeless as a baby doll
She sits there missing who she owes
Clicking nails, as she goes
No hand left for her to hold
She's just another broken soul
A hand suspended there to hold
As hollow as an empty shell
And lifeless as a baby doll
She sits there missing who she owes
Clicking nails, as she goes
No hand left for her to hold
She's just another broken soul
Published 15th Apr 2011
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15th Apr 2011 10:47pm
16th Apr 2011 1:24am
Thank you, am glad you like it, I actually write this one a very long time ago thought I'd put it on:P
16th Apr 2011 00:41am
16th Apr 2011 10:43pm
despite the sadness , i really felt something when i read it, it left me feeling hollow and empty in side, not in a bad way though :) keep it up !
4th Nov 2013 5:29pm
This is such a Unfortunate Beautiful Write... it has blown me...
very well done!!
Darker
very well done!!
Darker
4th Mar 2014 5:16pm
