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Adagio In Bedroom Whispers (Adagio en Dormitorios Susurros)
It would have been too easy
to welcome you in my bedroom
a place of sharing
first motion of touching
deep
deeper
to the center
of silken woven dreams
ignited by sinful pleasures
under trembling fingers
titillating dewed flesh
and honeyed fruit
scorching with desire
and yet
we do not burn
It would have been too easy
to make you my shrine
sprawled on scented sheets
trapped in a maze of
opal, azure, mint and onyx
the forbidden red of rouge,
smeared on devil's tongue
drawing our names
in melted wax
playing mind games
knowing fully well
losing is a
winning game
It would have been too easy
to seduce your senses
like a cave dweller blindly
drawn in my sanctuary
yearning for the
exquisite touch of
release
to please
in intoxicated bliss
lost in weightlessness
filling my oral fixated needs
oh lover,
you will never know
never see
with mortal eyes, for
you were never the one for me
It would have been easy
to know
for knowing is the final draw
to be in my bedroom
for 'US'
burrowed deep in belonging
as 'OUR' final
destiny
to welcome you in my bedroom
a place of sharing
first motion of touching
deep
deeper
to the center
of silken woven dreams
ignited by sinful pleasures
under trembling fingers
titillating dewed flesh
and honeyed fruit
scorching with desire
and yet
we do not burn
It would have been too easy
to make you my shrine
sprawled on scented sheets
trapped in a maze of
opal, azure, mint and onyx
the forbidden red of rouge,
smeared on devil's tongue
drawing our names
in melted wax
playing mind games
knowing fully well
losing is a
winning game
It would have been too easy
to seduce your senses
like a cave dweller blindly
drawn in my sanctuary
yearning for the
exquisite touch of
release
to please
in intoxicated bliss
lost in weightlessness
filling my oral fixated needs
oh lover,
you will never know
never see
with mortal eyes, for
you were never the one for me
It would have been easy
to know
for knowing is the final draw
to be in my bedroom
for 'US'
burrowed deep in belonging
as 'OUR' final
destiny
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Re: Adagio In Bedroom Whispers
Anonymous
23rd Sep 2014 2:29am
Ya Girl!! Mmmmmm! You brought us into your bedroom tonight. What a sexy seductive write. Enjoyed! Xo :)

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23rd Sep 2014 2:33am
Coming from you mami, that is a huge compliment!
I don't invite just anyone into my bedroom ; )
Besos!
I don't invite just anyone into my bedroom ; )
Besos!
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Anonymous
23rd Sep 2014 2:46am
You're a true woman with grace and class. Beautiful on the inside and out. Xo :)

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23rd Sep 2014 7:30pm
Re: Adagio In Bedroom Whispers (Adagio en Dormitorios Susurros)
23rd Sep 2014 5:04am
'never the one for me.' now that stings.
things are never really treasured if they come too easy...
things are never really treasured if they come too easy...
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23rd Sep 2014 7:47pm
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23rd Sep 2014 9:13am
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23rd Sep 2014 7:48pm
There is my sexy Rose!
Thank you so much, it means a great deal to me.
Thank you so much, it means a great deal to me.
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27th Oct 2014 10:42am
I'm glad you would mamacita.....You have beautiful taste too!
Thanks Rose ; )
Thanks Rose ; )
Re: Adagio In Bedroom Whispers (Adagio en Dormitorios Susurros)
24th Sep 2014 9:59pm
Your sexy and alluring poem held what the title promised. Beautiful wording, Lena!
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5th Oct 2014 11:41am
Thank you Miss Chi!
coming from a beautiful and sexy woman like you, I'm honored
coming from a beautiful and sexy woman like you, I'm honored
Re: Adagio In Bedroom Whispers (Adagio en Dormitorios Susurros)
5th Oct 2014 1:05pm
Flawlessly presented, sensually engaging!
I'm impressed indeed, n yet I feel sorry for the
subject of your thoughts, becuz HE will never know ur true pleasures lol
I'm impressed indeed, n yet I feel sorry for the
subject of your thoughts, becuz HE will never know ur true pleasures lol
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5th Oct 2014 1:18pm
Wow, thank you for the compliment Poe!
This took a while to put together. It began one way and ended another...lol
This took a while to put together. It began one way and ended another...lol
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5th Oct 2014 1:35pm
Ur welcome, n yea I write at the very sec. Inspiration hits
n I never know what the outcome, I just let the muse flow wherever it needs to go! :)
n I never know what the outcome, I just let the muse flow wherever it needs to go! :)
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17th Oct 2014 00:45am
I can hardly contain myself seeing your comment!
This is a true honor, thank you!
This is a true honor, thank you!
Re: Adagio In Bedroom Whispers (Adagio en Dormitorios Susurros)
22nd Oct 2014 1:36am
I am truly paused as I read this, your ability is flawless, structure and your way with words. So glad I clicked on this write.
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22nd Oct 2014 2:57am
I am truly honored and humbled by your presence Awakenedsoul. Your words are extremely touching as this was an emotional write for me.
I am up late trying to finish and add a pic to my next write and when I saw you commented and added this to your RL list, I could not call it a night without responding.
thank you so much!
I am up late trying to finish and add a pic to my next write and when I saw you commented and added this to your RL list, I could not call it a night without responding.
thank you so much!
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Re: Adagio In Bedroom Whispers (Adagio en Dormitorios Susurros)
20th Nov 2014 3:19am
Very sensual write! Each stanza titillating every male reader's fantasies. You weave such a seductive trail to the sanctuary of your bedroom, quite a special place to please and play. BRAVA! Poet.
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20th Nov 2014 12:27pm
Thank you so much sir!
It takes a special male to get into my sanctuary...lol
I appreciate your visit once again ; )
It takes a special male to get into my sanctuary...lol
I appreciate your visit once again ; )
Re: Adagio In Bedroom Whispers (Adagio en Dormitorios Susurros)
29th Nov 2014 2:50am
"to know
for knowing is the final draw"
Ms. Lena, you hit the bullseye!
Far too many, think they know.
They often proclaim they know.
But, when reality calls, "the final draw"
reveals their true identity.
For them, it is not meant to be. And, may never be.
I stand and applaud you. *literally*
for knowing is the final draw"
Ms. Lena, you hit the bullseye!
Far too many, think they know.
They often proclaim they know.
But, when reality calls, "the final draw"
reveals their true identity.
For them, it is not meant to be. And, may never be.
I stand and applaud you. *literally*
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30th Nov 2014 2:05am
I have to say, it's so great to see you!
Thank you for reading and feeling me on this piece because recently I found out the way I live my life is right on target for the best all around.
Thank you for reading and feeling me on this piece because recently I found out the way I live my life is right on target for the best all around.