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Heavenly Dormouse
the red hot fire opal
falls from the sea
and drenches the apples
in a cataclysmic ocean,
clothed as a heavenly dormouse
reaching for a diatom bloom.
falls from the sea
and drenches the apples
in a cataclysmic ocean,
clothed as a heavenly dormouse
reaching for a diatom bloom.
Published 15th Sep 2014
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15th Sep 2014 11:54am
15th Sep 2014 6:11pm
15th Sep 2014 11:03pm
Makes me think of primordial ooze and the first vertebrates to walk out of the water and onto land. Intriguing write.
15th Sep 2014 11:08pm
That is very cool xmar - let's go with that..:) thank you for the comment. I love the imagination that you guys add (to my already overactive).
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