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candy coated reflection
strokes birth ripples
undulating willow
candy coated reflection
strokes birth ripples
undulating willow
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15th Sep 2014 8:09am
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15th Sep 2014 1:02pm
Memories of a beautiful day with a beautiful lady ... I'm glad you enjoyed the balance within ... Thank you
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15th Sep 2014 8:23am
I love it, especially 'candy coated'. So much said with so few words.
You have my awe.
You have my awe.
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16th Sep 2014 1:23am
I'm humbled; and appreciate your finding this moment I wanted to share.
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Anonymous
15th Sep 2014 12:31pm
a lovely composition...short and poignant
:) nice one
:) nice one
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16th Sep 2014 1:30am
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16th Sep 2014 1:26am
Coming from a poet such as you - WOW! is a comment I'll simply treasure!
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24th Sep 2014 7:51am
Thank you for your kind words ... the day and the woman that inspired this leave me in awe.