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long seconds all day (short nothings)
Hard breathing drowning eternal yearn.
Reaching out to nothing yet images of you are so very clear.
Just another second of this day spent missing you
So comeback feel the thorns in these tears
Comeback and save me
Published 14th Sep 2014
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15th Sep 2014 00:04am
Very heartfelt words deep to the soul...
My favorite line:
Just another second of this day spent missing you
Loved it :)
My favorite line:
Just another second of this day spent missing you
Loved it :)
15th Sep 2014 9:12am
That line was just stating my state of mind...and I'm glad you like it....thank you my friend
This is amazing, so heartfull and heartbreaking. Its so honest and raw. each word is so full of hurt. Great work
15th Sep 2014 9:13am
Thank you for understanding Mikey...im glad I can express hurt well enough...sometimes you just gotta write it...xoxoxo luv ya bro
Anonymous
16th Sep 2014 1:14am
You have an amazing heart. Really like this! :)
16th Sep 2014 9:28am
